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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 10:07, 6 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Please shift the citations to the main textY
Link and introduce J.R.D. TataY
Link air mailY
later continuing to Madras Add that Chennai is the modern name.Y
was renamed to Air-India Say "Air India" throughout the articleY
attempts were made to privatise Air India and in 2006 onwards, it suffered losses after its merger with Indian Airlines. --> attempts were made to privatise Air India; from 2006 onwards, it suffered losses after its merger with Indian Airlines.Y

Add a word about who Tata wasY
Link air mailY
Add that Chennai is the modern name.Y
Who is Vincent?Y
flew 160,000 miles, carrying 155 passengers and 10.71 ton of mail and made a profit of 60,000 rupees Use convert templatesY
Duplinks: Puss Moth aircraft, Karachi, BombayY

Many parts are unsourcedY
public limited company Can we have any link here?Y
After the Indian independence --> After the independence of India in 1947Y
Links or explanations for terms like VT-CQP throughout this section? (Pls suggest; already included that it is registration number)
Duplinks:Lockheed Constellation L-1049, DelhiY

the then managing director with corruption --> the then managing director, with corruptionY
convert templates needed in some placesY
BJP and the CPI(M) linksY
20 per cent growth Say % or per cent throughout the articleY
Air India Ltd Say either Ltd or Limited throughout the articleY
Link FYY
Duplinks: Indian Airlines, Star Alliance, Civil Aviation MinisterY

Air India Limited, Indian, JRD Tata are duplinksY
Source for Subsidiaries?Y
When was the mascot created?Y
Air India's then commercial director When is "then"?Y
Air India's then commercial director Bobby Kooka, and Umesh Rao, an artist with J. Walter Thompson Ltd, created it. --> It was created by Bobby Kooka, the then commercial director of Air India, and Umesh Rao, an artist with J. Walter Thompson Ltd.Y
The air planes were earlier named after... old scheme was returned. Source?Y
the chakra Explain chakraY
What are nacellesY

As of 03,2016 Write properlyY
It is information not infoY
One full para is unsourcedY
Prime Minister of India, President of India or the Vice President of India Why repeat "of India"?Y
The 18 737s can cause confusionY
Towards the end, two duplinks: De Havilland Puss Moth, Boeing 707Y

There are eight Maharaja Lounges: Source?Y
Air India serves meals on all domestic and international flights. Source?Y
same 3 class configuration 3-->three. Look out for similar instancesY
Thales i3000 linkY
Shubh Yatra is a bilingual magazine ItalicsY
Duplinks: Boeing 747-400, Airbus A320, Hindi, English, Boeing 777-200LR, 777-300ER, 747-400 and 787Y

The Mercury Award from the International Flight Catering Association for finest in-flight catering services (1994, 2003) Source? Y
Air India became the first all-jet airline in June 1962. Air India's security department became the first aviation security organisation in the world to acquire ISO 9002 certification on 31 January 2001. Source?Y

and en route from Karachi to Bombay "and" not needed. Check for similar cases in the rest of the sectionY
Many listed incidents have no sourceY

@Magentic Manifestations: Awesome lightning-like job! I am content with the article, I believe it meets all the GA criteria. I gladly promote this. Sainsf <^>_{Talk all words} 18:10, 6 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]