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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 16:16, 26 September 2013 (UTC)
- No DABs, external links good.
- Images appropriately licensed.
- Beginning in 1991, Adem Jashari frequently crossed the Yugoslav–Albanian border in order to participate in armed attacks against the Serbian police How is this possible if he lived in Kosovo?
This doesn't make sense to me either, so I've removed it and added that he participated in an anti-Serb uprising in '91.
- What did he do for a living?
He appears to have been a farmer. I've added this to the article.
- After you use the full name once, it's policy to just use the last name.
Fixed.
- Can you say more about his actual guerrilla activities?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:16, 26 September 2013 (UTC)
As mentioned above, I added how he participated in rebellion against Serb rule in 1991. I hope I've addressed all your comments. Regards, 23 editor (talk) 20:31, 29 September 2013 (UTC)