Talk:45th Infantry Division (United Kingdom)/GA1

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Reviewer: CPA-5 (talk · contribs) 10:53, 12 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Claim my seat here. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 10:53, 12 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

It was intended that the division would remain in the United Kingdom Unlink the Uk because of common term.
Link removed EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 04:50, 14 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
training and preparation, before being deployed to France within twelve months Unlink France because of common term.
Link removed EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 04:50, 14 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
inland to provide a counterattack force American counterattack.
Hyphen added EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 04:50, 14 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
in order to provide an additional counterattacking force American counterattacking.
ditto EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 04:50, 14 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
to counterattack any German force that assaulted Same as above.
ditto EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 04:50, 14 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
By the end of summer, the 2nd New Zealand Division had Try to avoid to use seasons.
Switched up to "by September", as both sources do not provide a concrete date for the arrival of the New Zealanders in this position but do note they were there by this month. EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 04:50, 14 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Unlink Major-General in the "General officers commanding" section.
Link removed EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 04:50, 14 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
a small red diamond above a dark blue half circle in the centre Half circle needs an hyphen.
This is a direct quote from the IWM EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 04:50, 14 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
this layout was rare. With the return of the 133th Brigade "133th" typo?
Quite, and corrected EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 04:50, 14 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
positioned further inland in order to provide an additional Remove "in order".
Removed EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 04:50, 14 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox

"1 September 1944 – ~ December 1945" --> "1 September 1944 – ~December 1945"
Amended EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 04:50, 14 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
The rest looks good to me.

Images

Are the File:The British Army in the United Kingdom 1939-45 H22489.jpg and File:The British Army in the United Kingdom 1939-45 H24661.jpg images in public domain in the US?
Yes, per the HMSO Crown Copyright rules regarding copyright protection lapsing after 50 years from creation.EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 04:50, 14 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Looks good to me.

Sources

"Colossal Cracks: Montgomery's 21st Army Group in Northwest Europe, 1944-45" needs a Google Books URL.
Google Books claims that the book "Fortitude: The D-Day Deception Campaign" was made in 1999, which one is correct?
I have been referencing the American publication, which was in 2000. See here.EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 04:50, 14 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Google Books uses "Orders of Battle: Second World War, 1939–45" instead of "Orders of Battle: Second World War, 1939–1945" which one do you use?
Front page of my copy of Joslen states 1945 EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 04:50, 14 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
"For Love of Regiment: A History of British Infantry, Volume 2, 1915-1994" Needs a Google Books URL.
"The Commonwealth Armies: Manpower and Organisation in Two World Wars" needs a Google Books URL.
"The D. L. I. at War: The History of the Durham Light Infantry 1939–1945" needs a Google Books URL.
"Kitchener s Army: The Raising of the New Armies 1914-1916" needs a Google Books URL.

That's anything from me. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 17:26, 13 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

On the whole, since when do all sources need a link to Google Books? EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 04:50, 14 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Sadly since WP:GBOOKS said that to me, but only if Google Books gives us a preview in the source. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 07:13, 14 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Requested links addedEnigmaMcmxc (talk) 16:42, 14 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I'll pass it. Great article. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 18:27, 15 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]