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  • Again clarify that the brigades were inactive when the division was garrisoning Korea. And maybe you could structure it something like this: "The 2nd Brigade received the lineage of the 13th Infantry Brigade, formerly assigned to the division during World War I."
  • Strictly speaking the 13th and 14th Brigades weren't assigned to the division's HHC, but rather to the division's HQ, which isn't exactly the HHC.
  • You might want to add OB listings for the brigade to show how many troops the brigade controlled at various times. Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:05, 30 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed all issues. -Ed!(talk) 02:30, 31 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
This sentence needs to be fixed on this and the 3rd Brigade article. By 1994, the garrison closed the Division subsequently relocated to Fort Lewis, Washington. And the other comments that I copied from the 3rd Brigade article: There's some confusion with tenses and stuff regarding the BRAC plan for the division and what actually happened. I think that the 2nd and 3rd Brigades formally deactivated in 1993 at Ft. Ord, while the division deactivated later. Is that correct? If so please clarify that in the article. Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:12, 31 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
How does it look now? -Ed!(talk) 17:32, 31 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
    Still like to see OB listings at various times. Also exactly when did the brigade deactivate?
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
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