Talk:2023 24 Hours of Le Mans/GA1

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Nominator: EnthusiastWorld37 (talk · contribs) 11:53, 5 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: DoctorWhoFan91 (talk · contribs) 06:03, 1 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'll take this one, expect initial remarks in the next 24 hours (edit- 48-72 hours). DoctorWhoFan91 (talk) 06:03, 1 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

It's a long article, so I'll give remarks heading by heading. DoctorWhoFan91 (talk) 09:45, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

three-driver teams: teams of three drivers
Wikilink GT and Protptype like in the 2022 article.
- No, to the racing car type, see the wikilinks for the 2022 edition
  - Done EnthusiastWorld37 (talk) 06:34, 5 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    - No, i meant this ( Le Mans Prototypes (LMP) and [[Le Mans Grand Touring Endurance (LMGTE) cars) User:EnthusiastWorld37, like in the 2022 article?
      - Amended EnthusiastWorld37 (talk) 09:44, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The week before the event, on 4 June, there was a test day.: There was a test day on 4th June, a week before the event.
Their teammates James Calado, Antonio Giovinazzi and Alessandro Pier Guidi won overall after leading the final 55 laps.: Make it clear that there are multiple cars by a single team.

Separate the 3 different categories into 3 different paragraphs- The sea of blue makes it feel confusing, so the team positions will help separate them as well

the Automobile Club de l'Ouest: Add (ACO) after
LMGTE Pro was dropped from the race in 2023, leaving only the Le Mans Grand Touring Endurance Amateur (LMGTE Am) class.: Mention that it's the only class remaining for GT racing, reads confuingly otherwise.

Was their any effect of the teams not consenting to the change
- Umm?
  - I cannot find any information on this specifically EnthusiastWorld37 (talk) 09:43, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Table 1 and 2 of Hypercar seem to not have any space between them in my browser, needs some

@DoctorWhoFan91: Have made changes to the article based on the above points EnthusiastWorld37 (talk) 14:38, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@EnthusiastWorld37: Added a reply in the lead section; I'll add comments for the other headings later (semi-busy IRL). DoctorWhoFan91 (talk) 06:18, 5 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

with two minutes left.[31][33][34] Toyota's No. 7 : left;[31][33][34] Toyata's No 7; Also split the para after this sentence.

Last sentence: Why did he stop there?
- I am unable to find the exact reason for why he stopped there EnthusiastWorld37 (talk) 09:59, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@EnthusiastWorld37: Added replies to two of your replies above; and added review for four more headings(remaining headings: practice, race and post-race). DoctorWhoFan91 (talk) 08:56, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@DoctorWhoFan91: More changes to the article have been made based on the new issues raised EnthusiastWorld37 (talk) 09:59, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]