Talk:2022 Northern Ireland Open

2022 Northern Ireland Open has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: July 20, 2024. (Reviewed version).

Cue sports Low‑importance

This article is within the scope of WikiProject Cue sports, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of pool, carom billiards and other cue sports on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.Cue sportsWikipedia:WikiProject Cue sportsTemplate:WikiProject Cue sportscue sports articles

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WikiProject Cue sports to-do list:

Here are some tasks awaiting attention:

Article requests : Lots of high-priority articles need to be created:

List of wanted articles...

Games: A bunch of high-priority game redlinks, e.g. American four-ball billiards (redirs to Four-ball billiards but not specifically covered there)
"Legends": Edwin Kelly, Charlie Peterson (pool player) (all BCA Hall of Famers); George Franklin Slosson, Maurice Daly (billiards player), Frank Ives, George Butler Sutton [not George H. Sutton, the one with no hands]
Male pool bios: Hsia Hui-kai
Female pool bios:
Male three-cushion bios: Dion Nelin & Jozef Bel Philipoom
Female carom bios: Aygen Berk Saygıner
Aristic pool bios: Nick Nikolaidis, Mark Dimick,Sebastian Giumelli, Eric Yow
Unranked in current pool but notable: Mike Eufemia, Shannon Daulton, Jimmy Reid (pool player) [speed pool champ], var. Mosconi Cup players
Non-player figures: Mitch Laurance, George Fels
Five-pins bios: Gustavo Zito
Organizations: Joss Tour
Events: WPA World Nine-ball Championships (pre-1997), BCA Open Nine-ball Championship, World 14.1 Continuous Championship, International Challenge of Champions (pool)
Media and misc.: Iwan Simonis (leading billiard cloth maker), Joss Cues (major cue mfr.), The Baron and the Kid [Johnny Cash film], Ultimate Pool Party [TV show]
And: everyone/thing listed at WP:CUEGAMES, WP:CUEEVENTS, WP:CUEORGS, WP:CUEBIOS, & WP:CUEMISC. Also a Cue sports world records article (many can be pulled from bio articles like Geet Sethi, Guinness Book will provide others, and so will BCA and other orgs., websites and books like Shamos 1999).
Meta: Outline of cue sports (OoK; cf. [1], etc.) – presently redirects to Cue sports, but this is not an OoK page.
Internal pages: Something like: [2][3]). Such pages are not fluff, but can be good places to find recruits for the project, possibly including subject-matter experts, especially if cross-referenced to the project. Also, Wikipedia:WikiProject Deletion sorting/Cue sports (cf. [4][5][6]).

Cleanup : Thomas Engert, Marlon Manalo
Copyedit : Jonni Fulcher
Expand : Cue sports techniques#Carom shots (section needs to exist), Straight pool, Alfredo de Oro,Jeanette Lee (pool player)
NPOV : Andy Segal (major WP:COI and WP:V issues, too), Jose Parica (it's bad!); Efren Reyes, Thomas Engert, Dennis Orcollo, Dick Jaspers
Photo : Category:Wikipedia requested photographs of cue sports and Category:Wikipedia requested photographs of cue sports people
Split : List of World Eight-ball Champions - blackball stuff needs own article {draft split from real eight-ball one (draft).
Stubs : loads of players in Category:Cue sports stubs
Update : Arcade game (link to bagatelle, bar billiards, etc.)
Verify : Cue stick (mostly WP:OR!), Frank Taberski (has major fact conflict between BCA & NYT sourcing), Russian pyramid, add sources to Unreferenced BLPs
Wikify : Chicago (pool), Jonni Fulcher
Other :
- Create timelines, both textual and graphical. See link for various guidelines and examples. We need an overall one for cue sports generally, and more specific ones as we drill down into more specific topics (timeline of nine-ball, timeline of Willie Mosconi's career, etc.).
- Form sections: Exhibition game needs section on cue sports; could later form a new article with "Main article..." xref to it. What other general articles need cue sports sections?
- CopyVio rewrite:
- Clarify: What is the "continuous pool" listed above "14.1 continuous" at Alfredo DeOro?
- Delete or defend:
- Move/Rename (and Redirect):
- Redirect:
- Unorphan:
- Ensure: that rules discussions in game articles & the Billiard techniques article do not violate WP:NOT#IINFO.
- Help fix: WP:CUEBIOS#Pool players (women) is nearly empty!
- Help develop: the lists of WP:CUEORGS and WP:CUEEVENTS
- Images: improve articles with images from commons; create pics and add them to commons as GFDL/CC-by/PD.
- Add: {{Sport overview}} to main articles of cue games that are real sports; medal table tags where they apply (see Ding Junhui for example).
- Insert: Cue sports events (tournament results, etc.) into the "year in sports" categories (e.g. 1965 in sports), using {{subst:Cue sports heading}} if that year doesn't have one yet.
- Change:
- Replace:
- Some day: Seek Featured Topic status.
- Plunder: the French article; it does have some interesting tidbits, structure and images. Check out de.wikipedia, etc., as well.
- Inter-wiki: Improve simple:Billiards and foreign-language key articles.

See also: Snooker to-do list

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Northern Ireland Low‑importance

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Snooker Low‑importance

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Score of Bingham-Lilley match invisible

The score of the Bingham-Lilley match has been entered by someone but does not show in the table (on my screen), and I have not been able to find the cause: it does not seem to be very obvious. Can a tables-expert help?Redav (talk) 22:21, 18 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:2022 Northern Ireland Open/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: HawkAussie (talk · contribs) 03:25, 21 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

I sure pick up this one to add

Lead

No issues with the lead there.

Format

...Eurosport in the United Kingdom, Europe, India, Bangladesh, Bhutan, Maldives, Nepal, Pakistan and Sri Lanka - Wouldn't this make sense to just go the Indian Subcontinent. Or something that mentions it being on Eurosport India like the reference states.
Could remove the Superstar online and the Sports Cast red link like it has been done with the Indonesian channel.

Summary

Qualification

...recovered from 2–3 behind to defeat Graeme Dott 4–3 - Possibly reword that sentence.
Having recently turned 60, Jimmy White made... - Do we need to include he had just turned 60 especially when it only mentioned the age and not how it was recently turn 60.

Early rounds

Quarter-finals

Semi-finals

Final

Main draw

No issues with this one.

Qualifying

Why use a separate reference for the qualifying when the reference for the main draw would also be sufficient to fill in that void.

Century breaks

References

Final comments

Anything for this HawkAussie? Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:24, 2 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

sorry for another ping, is there anything else I'd need to look at here HawkAussie? Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:40, 8 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Lee Vilenski and HurricaneHiggins, it looks like HawkAussie has only had middling activity on Wikipedia in the last few months. This review is getting quite old, and at this point I'd suggest either setting it to second opinion or relisting it. Thebiguglyalien (talk) 21:25, 27 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'm going to relist since this was abandoned. Wizardman 02:17, 13 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

Passed. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 06:09, 20 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

This review is transcluded from Talk:2022 Northern Ireland Open/GA2. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 21:16, 7 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 05:00, 15 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Jumping in because this has sat way, way too long. Not much to do. Pinging joint nom HurricaneHiggins. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 06:01, 15 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Sammi Brie, thanks for your review and your suggested edits. What is "CINS"? HurricaneHiggins (talk) 09:18, 16 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry, I see you're referring to commas there. I've made all the edits you suggested ... thank you! HurricaneHiggins (talk) 09:36, 16 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Yeah, WP:CINS. It's an error I tend to find a lot of in these pages (and I only review one a drive!). Going to let @Lee Vilenski take a look quickly before I promote. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 14:23, 16 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Great, thank you so much, @Sammi Brie! And I will look for that comma error when editing pages. HurricaneHiggins (talk) 10:13, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Did you know? If you fancy doing so, I always have plenty of GA nominees to review. Just look for the all-uppercase titles in the Television section. Reviews always appreciated.

Copy changes

Lead

The win gave Allen the seventh ranking title of his career, and qualified him for the following month's Champion of Champions invitational event. Here's the first CINS

Summary

Three top-16 seeds failed to reach the round of 64: Seventh seed No need to capitalize "seventh"
O'Sullivan commented afterwards that he no longer had "passion and desire" for snooker, and that it had "become like an emotionless-type job". Remove comma CINS
Higgins responded with a 69 clearance to tie the scores, and then made a 124 break in the decider Remove comma CINS
Sixth seed Higgins lost 1–4 to Robert Milkins, who took a 3–1 lead by winning the fourth frame on a respotted black, before clinching the match with a 63 break in the fifth. Remove second comma: not an appositive.
Lee tied the scores with a 91 break in frame six, but missed a key pot on the black in the decider CINS (Anything with no reasoning from here on out is CINS)
Robertson won the fifth frame with an 84 break, and made a break of 63 in the sixth.
Selby had an opportunity to steal the sixth frame with a clearance, but opted to lay a snooker on the final red due to the difficulty of gaining position on the black.
However, he missed several opportunities to close out the match and Zhou made breaks of 63 and 54 to draw level at 4–4. Add comma after match
McGill responded with a 73 break in the sixth after Zhou missed a red, and made a 101 break in the seventh to move 4–3 ahead.
McGill had the chance to force a decider in the tenth, but missed a shot on the blue.
"If I win [the tournament], I will be happy to have made my dream come true", said Zhou, but added "It is important to not get under pressure, this is no good. You have to not think about the trophy and just play". Change "but added" to "who added"
Jimmy White and Ronnie O'Sullivan criticised the warning in commentary, noting that other players had spent significantly longer over shots without the referee intervening, including a previous incident involving Scullion at the 2019 event, when Selby spent over six minutes on a shot without being warned. Consider splitting long sentence
Allen made breaks of 53, 85, 50, and 51 to move 8–4 ahead, before making a 109 clearance to win his eighth consecutive frame and clinch the title with a 9–4 victory. Remove comma after "ahead"

Sourcing and spot checks

6 — WST prize pool breakdown is correctly reproduced. Y
20 — BBC Sport article mentions Trump's loss to world-ranked-95 Hill. Y
33 — All three 4–1 results are confirmed. Y
37 — However, a crucial missed yellow gave Robertson a reprieve as he moved 4-2 up, and breaks of 73 and 53 sealed his victory in frame seven. Y
43 — Result matches article. Y
47 — Defending champion Mark Allen took the last three frames of the afternoon to end level with China’s Zhou Yuelong at 4-4 in the BetVictor Northern Ireland Open final. ... Allen dug deep and contributions of 68 and 55 helped him to claim the last three of the session to set up a grandstand finish this evening. Y

Images

All images CC-licensed or public domain. (Thanks, Bill da Flute!) Add alt text, "Refer to caption" in all cases.

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