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Good article2020–21 SC East Bengal season has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
December 15, 2020Good article nomineeNot listed
April 28, 2021Good article nomineeListed
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on June 1, 2021.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that SC East Bengal became the first club in Indian football to activate the force majeure clause in their 2020–21 season?
Current status: Good article


Durand Cup

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I am not aware about Durand Cup being organized this year. Please let me know if I am wrong. This article mentions it quite a lot of time. M Kariyappa (talk) 15:21, 17 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Poppified (talk · contribs) 06:40, 14 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it well written?
    A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
    B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
  2. Is it verifiable with no original research?
    A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
    B. All in-line citations are from reliable sources, including those for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons—science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines:
    C. It contains no original research:
    D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
    B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):
  4. Is it neutral?
    It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
  5. Is it stable?
    It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
  6. Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
    A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
    B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:
    There are many problems to be addressed and also article lacks information on the current season as the season is incomplete. Fail

Comments

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1). As the season not completed the Info in the article is not complete. Best Wishes Poppified (talk) 12:28, 15 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

2). Lede section is incomplete needed more info. Best Wishes Poppified (talk) 12:28, 15 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

3). Didn't mentioned it's the first season of East Bengal in Indian Super league. Best WishesPoppified (talk) 12:28, 15 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

4). The image in the Infobox should be removed as it is tagged for deletion in commons. Best WishesPoppified (talk) 12:28, 15 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

5). There are spelling mistakes and grammatical mistakes in the article. Needed to be addressed. Best Wishes Poppified (talk) 12:28, 15 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

6). There are many duplicate links in article.Need to fix it. Best Wishes Poppified (talk) 12:28, 15 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

7) The article suffers from a few single sentenced paragraphs. Could easily combine them.Best Wishes Poppified (talk) 12:28, 15 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 02:54, 27 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 02:54, 27 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

  • The short name for East Bengal should be included in the lead with parentheses.
  • "its first 100 years" Centennial?
  • Kolkata Derby should be linked in the lead.
  • "Then they were undefeated for the next seven matches." Not the best to start a sentence with "then".
  • "four goals from 17 matches" Four goals in 17 matches?
  • "East Bengal officially announced that Balwant had signed a two-year contract with the team on 12 April 2020." Balwant need a link, and was this the first action for the team's pre-season?
  • "The next day the club signed former fullback Lalramchullova back" No need to mention former when he's still playing as a fullback.
    • Here, former is intended as former player. He played for EB in 2018-19, then went to rival club in 2019-20. Again came back in 2020-21.  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  08:21, 28 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • No need to say upcoming when the article is in past tense, the season's over.
  • "goalkeeper Sankar Roy from Mohun Bagan, defenders Mohammed Irshad from Gokulam Kerala and Keegan Pereira from Jamshedpur and Girik Khosla from Punjab FC." Would replace the last two "and"s with commas.
  • Can't seem to open the reference, or maybe it's just me.
  • "Defenders Anil Chawan from ATK and Vikas Saini" Lowercase d for defenders.
  • "autumn 2019" Capitalize Autumn.
  • "the de facto]" Extra bracket.
  • "before the official exit, i.e. 1 May 2020" Better to say "before the official exit on 1 May 2020."
  • "This was the first time this had happened in Indian Football." Could be merged to say, "the first time the clause was activated in Indian football".
  • "the club and Chief Minister Mamata Banerjee, announced at the state secretariat Nabanna, that Kolkata-based firm Shree Cement was the club's new investor." Would sound better without commas.
  • "The club announced former India captain Renedy Singh would be the team's new assistant coach[54] and Liverpool legend Robbie Fowler was signed as the team's new head coach on 9 October." IN most cases the hierarchy has the head coach mentioned first, then the assistant coach.
  • "He would be assisted" He as in Fowler?
  • Background section seems to be missing significant departures.
  • Or loans either, but I can see them interspersed in the ISL overview section.
  • Because of the force majeure clause most of the contracts terminated at once. Also, after being released from club, not enough coverage regarding them. But, added few of them.  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  08:40, 28 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 07:50, 28 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Nova Crystallis: Done.  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  10:46, 28 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Desertarun (talk) 12:45, 26 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Manjappada
  • Comment: For ALT0, Quess was the previous investor. They had major control over club's football activities. And, they activated the clause. So, what to name: Quess East Bengal or just East Bengal?

Improved to Good Article status by ArnabSaha (talk) and SabyaC (talk). Nominated by ArnabSaha (talk) at 08:18, 29 April 2021 (UTC).[reply]


General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.
Overall: Both hooks are approved. I prefer ALT0 because "set-piece coach" doesn't have a wikiarticle and I don't know what that is, so it might be confusing for other Main Page readers. I added "their" to ALT 0 for grammatical reasons. Z1720 (talk) 00:39, 26 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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