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- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 16:41, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
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Manjappada
... that Manjappada (roadshow pictured) is the largest supporters group of the Kochi-based football club Kerala Blasters FC, which competes in the Indian Super League, the top tier of Indian football?Source: https://www.thenewsminute.com/article/manjappada-diehard-kerala-blasters-fan-group-s-making-waves-111908
Improved to Good Article status by Iamfarzan (talk) and Poppified (talk). Nominated by Iamfarzan and Poppified.
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Hook eligibility:
- Cited: - the citation doesn't say this.
- Interesting: - self-promotional.
Image eligibility:
- Freely licensed:
- Used in article:
- Clear at 100px: - the image quality isn't good
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Overall: the same issue was pointed out in the GA review, regarding the use of the word "largest". (Another thing, this is my first DYK review. If there's any issue/mistake in the review, please inform) Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe 06:41, 5 January 2021 (UTC)
- Please don't overwrite existing hooks. If you have a new alt or additions to an old one, please post them at the bottom with a new alt number, like ALT1, ALT2, ALT3, etc. Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe 07:27, 5 January 2021 (UTC)
- ALT1:
... that Manjappada (pictured) is the one of the largest supporters group of the Kochi-based football club Kerala Blasters FC, which competes in the Indian Super League, the top tier of Indian football?
- The current image is simply too dark in many places. And there's still issue with the hook. Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe 07:31, 5 January 2021 (UTC)
- ALT2:
... that Forty-one busloads of Manjappada (pictured) members from across Kerala arrived at Kochi's Jawaharlal Nehru Stadium for the 2019–20 season opener against ATK on 20 October 2019 ?Source: https://www.thenewsminute.com/article/manjappada-diehard-kerala-blasters-fan-group-s-making-waves-111908 - ArnabSaha, is this fine? Iamfarzan (talk) 09:02, 5 January 2021 (UTC)
- Iamfarzan Looks good, but it doesn't say that all of them were manjapdda members. The source say that they were KBFC. Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe 10:15, 5 January 2021 (UTC)
- ArnabSaha, from the source "The fan group ( that is manjappada) was able to coordinate and bring fans to the venue in 41 buses, a feat none of the other fan clubs in ISL have been able to manage so far." that means it's valid I think.Iamfarzan (talk) 11:32, 5 January 2021 (UTC)
- Iamfarzan "bring fans to the venue" - fans and members of manjappada are technically different. all members are fans but all fans aren't members of a fanclub. Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe 12:42, 5 January 2021 (UTC)
- ALT3:
...that Manjappada (pictured) , the supporters group of Kerala Blasters FC coordinated and brought Forty-one busloads of their fans across Kerala to Kochi's Jawaharlal Nehru Stadium for the 2019–20 season opener against ATK on 20 October 2019 ?Source: https://www.thenewsminute.com/article/manjappada-diehard-kerala-blasters-fan-group-s-making-waves-111908 - ArnabSaha, is this fine?Bestwishes Poppified (talk) 14:12, 5 January 2021 (UTC)
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- ALT2:
Looks good now. Needs some minor changes. Maybe this... Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe 14:46, 5 January 2021 (UTC)
- ALT4:
...that Manjappada, the supporters' group of Kerala Blasters FC (pictured) coordinated and brought forty-one busloads of their fans across Kerala to the venue for the 2019–20 season opener against ATK on 20 October 2019?
- ArnabSaha , this one looks good.And about the image it's been updated in commons.I think it's better now.Can you cross check it? Bestwishes Poppified (talk) 14:55, 5 January 2021 (UTC)
- Shortened. Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe 14:58, 5 January 2021 (UTC)
- ALT5: ... that Manjappada, the supporters' group of Kerala Blasters FC (pictured) coordinated and brought forty-one busloads of their fans across Kerala to the venue for the 2019–20 season opener match?
Done ALT5. Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe 15:13, 5 January 2021 (UTC)