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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 14:24, 10 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Will have a look at this. MWright96 (talk) 14:24, 10 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Lead

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  • "and marks the thirtieth running of the Austrian Grand Prix" - Marked since the race was held in the past
  • Remove the link to Austria in the prose and infobox

Championship

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  • Wikilink both the Drivers' and Constructors' Championships

Circuit changes

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  • Spell out the FIA in full

Free practice

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  • "with Vettel and Kimi Räikkönen third and fourth respectively" - a comma is needed at the end of this sentence
  • Delink Max Verstappen since he's already link in the circuit changes sub-section
  • Link gravel trap to Run-off area
  • Link intermediate tyres to Rain tyre
  • Fernando Alonso is not linked

Qualifying

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  • Delink Nico Hülkenberg, Romain Grosjean
  • Spell out Bottas as Valteeri Bottas since it is the first time he is mentioned and add a wikilink
  • Same for Felipe Massa

Race

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  • All mentions of the word "pitted" should be "made a pit stop" to reduce motorsport jargon

Post-race

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  • "Their head of motorsport," - I think director of motorsport would be better
  • Captialise constructors'
  • "on now 295 to 192 points." - swap the words "now" and "on"

Classification (Qualifying)

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  • The fourth note has a citation needed tag

References

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  • no dead links. However it states the three Associated Press sources are "expiring news links". Can they be archived?

On hold until the points have been actioned. MWright96 (talk) 16:03, 10 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@MWright96: Thank you for your review! Unfortunately, I did not get around to deal with all points so far and I will fly to Hungary tomorrow, where I'll have no internet. Could you leave this review open until, say, the 26th? Zwerg Nase (talk) 19:14, 16 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]
@Zwerg Nase: Yes, I can do that. :) MWright96 (talk) 19:19, 16 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]
@MWright96: I'm afraid I'll need the weekend as well, I am swamped right now... Zwerg Nase (talk) 20:55, 26 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]
@Zwerg Nase: Very well. MWright96 (talk) 20:57, 26 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]
@MWright96: Thank you for your patience! I took care of everything now except for capitalizing "constructors'". The reason behind that is while Drivers' Championship is a set term and therefore in capital letters, the equivalent with "standings" is not. Does that make sense? Zwerg Nase (talk) 08:28, 28 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]
@Zwerg Nase:. I understand. Not a serious issue but can now promote this to GA. MWright96 (talk) 08:36, 28 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]
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