Talk:1992 European Community Monitor Mission helicopter downing/GA1
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 09:03, 4 December 2013 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 09:03, 4 December 2013 (UTC)
- Our bête noir: They were flying from Yugoslav capital "the" Yugoslav
- Probably too much detail here: The missile fired from the starboard wing flew between the two helicopters, while the one fired from the port side wing struck the engine Better, I think, to say that one missile flew between the helicopters and the other hit the engine.
- Correct the lede. Only one Italian and the French observer were officers, the others were non-commissioned officers. And fix the following sentence as well.
- decorated Italian ECMM "the" Italian
- Delete the "the" here: causing the Jat Airways
- Put the title of Lucarelli in title case.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:33, 10 December 2013 (UTC)
Thank you for the review. I believe I have addressed the concerns you raised above.--Tomobe03 (talk) 15:28, 10 December 2013 (UTC)