Talk:1977 (Ash album)/GA1
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Reviewer: Wetrorave (talk · contribs) 14:52, 15 June 2021 (UTC)
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My first GA review, so I'm not sure if I am doing this correctly but I'll try
Lead and infobox
[edit]- "May 1996, through Infectious Records with whom" > "May 1996 by Infectious Records, with whom"
- "They released the mini-album Trailer" - who released it, the label or the band?
- Use either "Trailer (1994)" or "Trailer in 1994", not both at the same time
- "some of whom commented on its catchy nature" > "who praised the album's 'catchy' nature" for neutrality
Background
[edit]- Good
Production
[edit]- Retitle to "Recording and production"
- Unless the placement is necessary for the reader to understand something in other sections, this should be below "Composition and lyrics"
- You may prefer to use Cite tweet instead for the tweets by Ash, though this is more of a style preference of mine rather than a GA criterion
Composition and lyrics
[edit]- Change the first "co-written" to "co-wrote"
- "The band purposefully wanted the song to be a "proper punch in the face", which they achieved." > "According to the band, the song was meant to be a "proper punch in the face"."
- "and evokes the Boo Radleys," > "reminiscent of the Boo Radleys,"
- "was written about" > "was about"
Release
[edit]- Good
Critical reception
[edit]- According to the Album ratings template, "do not include language like 'Very favorable' or '(mixed)' in the template, as this would be original research."
- Several of the sentences here are far too large; try splitting them up
- "Erlewine said by" > "Erlewine said that, by"
- "on Trailer, however," > "on Trailer. However," or "on Trailer; however,"
Commercial performance and accolades
[edit]- The last paragraph should be in Critical reception
- You may prefer to present accolades in a way that mixes table and prose form; see Everywhere at the End of Time for an example
Track listing
[edit]- Good
Personnel
[edit]- Good
Charts and certifications
[edit]- Good
References
[edit]- Ref 79 should cite Acclaimed Music as publisher= rather than website=
- Make sure all album names are italicized—e.g., change "How Ash Wrote Their Debut LP '1977' " to "How Ash Wrote Their Debut LP 1977"
Conclusion
[edit]- On hold until issues are fixed; you may add an External links section or images of the band Ash. Wetrorave (talk) 14:52, 15 June 2021 (UTC)
- @Wetrorave: Made the changes. Yeepsi (talk) 15:20, 15 June 2021 (UTC)
- @Yeepsi: Alright, ✓ Pass for this one. Wetrorave (talk) 15:33, 15 June 2021 (UTC)
- @Wetrorave: Made the changes. Yeepsi (talk) 15:20, 15 June 2021 (UTC)