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Reviewer: Catlemur (talk · contribs) 18:26, 6 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]


  • Add a reference to Note a.
  • The coup happened within the context of the Chaco War. I think the article would benefit greatly from a paragraph about said war so that the information could be better contextualized.
  • "Salamanca's questionable military decisions" - Can you provide some examples?
  • You need to add a United States public domain tag for all the images in the article.
  • "The authors of the coup" - Reword this.
  • Quotes that are longer than forty words or a few hundred characters should be enclosed in "blockquote" per MOS:BLOCKQUOTE.
  • Remove the second wikilink for La Razón.
  • How did the coup affect the course of the war?
  • What was the reaction of neighbouring nations to the coup?
  • Footnotes 10 should be pp. 75–76 instead of p. 75–76.
  • Remove the Refbegin and Refend indentation from Bibliography.
  • The titles of all sources that are written in a language other than English need to be translated (including footnotes 22 and 23).
@Krisgabwoosh: You got a talkpage notification about the review and I pinged you after you failed to respond a week later. Go ahead and adress the issues I highlighted. You can renominate the article if you need to.--Catlemur (talk) 17:39, 23 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]