Draft talk:PuppySpot

Input on tone and notability

Hi @Ktkvtsh, and thank you for reviewing the proposed article about PuppySpot. I'm going to make edits aimed at adjusting the tone and neutral point of view. Before I start down that path, I was hoping you could point to an example of language that needs to be adjusted. It will help to have a target to shoot for when I start rewriting the article.

Also, your rejection didn't mention notability. Is it safe to assume that you agree on the question of notability and would like to see a better tone? If there are broader issues, I'd like to consider them all as I work on improving the article.

Thanks again for your time. Any feedback is appreciated. SBCornelius (talk) 19:27, 1 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Revised intro paragraph

I've changed the opening paragraph to make the tone more encyclopedic. I'm open to making additional changes to the body, but I hope to receive some specific feedback upon the second review. Thank you for your time. SBCornelius (talk) 14:17, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]