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Submission declined: This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources.

With the comment: On WP you must cite all stated facts with inline citations for verifiability my submission is declined. In my opinion all stated facts are verifiable with the given references. But it seems that it is not clear how the statements match to the different references. I will try to improve this. I take it as personal challenge to get it accepted...

For such a techical topic we have as a primary source the standard who defines the technology. All other documents are based on this standards.
As a second source we can find (reviewed) journal papers and white papers who describe the functionality and performance of this technology.
Marketing publications and press releases give the background information and application benefits. This may be interesting for the evaluation of the importance of such a technology.

So I will modify the draft according this structure with more detailled inline citations Felser (talk) 14:54, 8 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Tone of the article

I changed the structure of the article and adapted wording. It sounds now like a textbook I typically write as an expert of the topic for my students. I hope this is also fine for Wikipedia. Felser (talk) 11:36, 5 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

As this was not anymore the reason for the declination I remove this remark.Felser (talk) 14:54, 8 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]