Draft talk:Benjamin Freidenberg

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Sources

Hello, here is a short summary of the sources in the draft:

4 is The Hebrew University of Jerusalem - one of the top uni' in Israel (we have only a few)
5 is the Tel-Aviv International Student Film Festival - this is reliable and not everyone can be in it
8 is the the Jerusalem Cinematheque - same as above
9 is one of the top collages in Israel
15 is one of the top news sites in Israel named globes
17 is times of Israel and also a major site in Israel and and international one
19 is the same as above and called ynet

Many of the sources are on Freidenberg himself and others mention him and prizes he won. Thank you for reading. Li-reg (talk) 19:32, 16 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Regarding the sources:

4 just mentions he is a director, researcher, and lecturer at the Jerusalem Cinematheque and the Tel Aviv Museum of Art[1]
5 is his bio at a school where he is on the faculty, so it is not independent
8 is just a list of his works and contains no prose; even if it did, he lectures at the institution
9 is a video of him giving a speech, not independent coverage
18 (renumbered, I guess?) is a Globes article] but does not have significant coverage. All it says about him is, "The film 'Guided Tour', by Sam Spiegel graduate Benjamin Frydenberg, which last night won the Volgin Award for the best short film at the Jerusalem Film Festival, was accepted to the Locarno International Film Festival, Switzerland."
20 is a Times of Israel article but only mentions him in passing: "'Wafa,' also known as 'Territory X,' written by Benjamin Freidenberg and Ihab Jadallah…"
22 is a Ynet news story that mention an award he won, but it does not discuss him in any detail.

Hence the comment that there is no in-depth coverage of Freidenberg provided in the sources. —C.Fred (talk) 12:58, 19 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@C.Fred so you decided to still write this after all and that leads me to understanding this is very personal for you and you are doing your best to make sure he wont be approved. I hope I am wrong but I will contact the support to make sure the draft is being reviewed in a professional manner. Li-reg (talk) 21:20, 1 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Li-reg Do not be surprised when other reviewers tell you the same things about the sourcing. —C.Fred (talk) 21:29, 1 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

close connection

Hello, I am not sure why this was added but I do not have a close connection with subject. I do know him but this is not paid or comes from any other reason than trying to get this wiki page "up & running". Thank you. Li-reg (talk) 19:14, 18 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]