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The Kivunim Institute is a co-educational Jewish pluralistic nonprofit organization. The origin of the name comes from its Hebrew translation: literally, "directions." Its main component is its offering of a gap year program to students who have completed high school. The gap year program is based in Jerusalem, where students study Hebrew, Arabic, Jewish History, Visual Arts, and the Israeli-Palestinian conflict. Through global travel, students study international Jewish communities, different religions, and various ideologies through experiential learning.^[2] The Kivunim Institute is affiliated with Hebrew College, which issues Kivunim students a transcript for their studies. Although the program is centered around Jewish studies, non-Jewish students are permitted to enroll in the program.

History

The Kivunim Institute
Founder(s)	Peter Geffen
Established	2006
Faculty	Peter Geffen, Amal Abu-Sif, Tobi Kahn, Moki Schwartz
Slogan	"Building World Consciousness"
Location	Jerusalem, Israel
Website	kivunim.org

The Kivunim Institute was founded in 2006 by Jewish philanthropist Peter Geffen.

Mission

According to the Kivunim Institute, its mission is "active interpretation of the past and understanding of the present in order to build the future." To achieve this goal, the Kivunim Institute attempts to facilitate Arab-Israeli coexistence education, and providing diversity of perspective.

Gap Year

The Kivunim Institute's gap year program is based in Jerusalem, where students' academic classroom studies take place. Experiential learning takes place abroad, where students study international Jewish history.^[3]

International Travel

According to the Kivunim Institute, students travel to up to 12 countries internationally, including Greece, Albania, Bulgaria, India, Morocco, Spain, Portugal, Germany, the Czech Republic, and Italy. Students on the program have met the 14th Dalai Lama^[4], and Andre Azoulay, the senior advisor to the King of Morocco.^[5]

Academic component

Students on the program spend time in Jerusalem studying Hebrew, Arabic, Jewish History, Visual Arts, and the Israeli-Palestinian conflict. The organization states that it prides itself on excellence in the liberal arts, and places and emphasis on field learning. While not traveling internationally, students embark on trips within Israel and the West Bank. Courses include: "Civilization and Society: Homelands in Exile", "Land, People, Ideas: The Challenges of Zionism", "Hebrew Language and Literature", "Arabic Language and Culture", and "Visual Learning: The Art of Seeing."^[6]

References

^ "Kivunim Faculty". Hebrew College. Retrieved June 4, 2024.
^ BELLAN, BERNIE. "Jaron Rykiss's half-year spent on exciting "Kivunim" program in Israel cut short by COVID". The Jewish Post and News. Retrieved June 10, 2024.
^ Lapin, Andrew (October 8, 2023). "Umbrella for gap-year programs in Israel says all of its 5,700 participants are safe". Jewish Telegraphic Agency. Retrieved June 4, 2024.
^ "Meeting with Students from the USA and Israel". The 14th Dalai Lama. Retrieved June 4, 2024.
^ Cohen, Anne (December 23, 2015). "Honoring the Moroccan King Who Saved the Jews". The Forward. Retrieved June 4, 2024.
^ BELLAN, BERNIE. "Jaron Rykiss's half-year spent on exciting "Kivunim" program in Israel cut short by COVID". The Jewish Post and News. Retrieved June 10, 2024.

[1] "Kivunim Faculty". Hebrew College. Retrieved June 4, 2024.

[2] BELLAN, BERNIE. "Jaron Rykiss's half-year spent on exciting "Kivunim" program in Israel cut short by COVID". The Jewish Post and News. Retrieved June 10, 2024.

[3] Lapin, Andrew (October 8, 2023). "Umbrella for gap-year programs in Israel says all of its 5,700 participants are safe". Jewish Telegraphic Agency. Retrieved June 4, 2024.

[4] "Meeting with Students from the USA and Israel". The 14th Dalai Lama. Retrieved June 4, 2024.

[5] Cohen, Anne (December 23, 2015). "Honoring the Moroccan King Who Saved the Jews". The Forward. Retrieved June 4, 2024.

[6] BELLAN, BERNIE. "Jaron Rykiss's half-year spent on exciting "Kivunim" program in Israel cut short by COVID". The Jewish Post and News. Retrieved June 10, 2024.

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