Draft:Poki Ng(personal)
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Comment: I disagree with the first reviewer's opinion, I am pretty sure the subject person has individual notability due to his career outside ERROR. However, the sources in the article currently fail to demonstrate this. You may consider using some secondary and reliable sources that provide significant coverage on the subject person to write his biography, for example this Sky Post article[1]. Also, the current format of the article does not align with Wikipedia's manual of style, please take a look at the Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Biography and follow the instructions in composing the article. Take a look at the Biography section of the respective article on the Chinese Wikipedia for reference. Feel free to ask for advice or another review for resubmission here at my talk page. Prince of Erebor（The Book of Mazarbul） 15:00, 10 July 2024 (UTC)
He is one of the members of the male pop quartet ERROR; following the release of his first solo single "Voluptuous" (Chinese: 猥瑣) in 2022, he was also recognized as a newcomer vocalist of that year.
Introduction
[edit]2018-2020
[edit]Ng first came to public’s awareness in 2018 as he became one of the 99 contestants at ViuTV’s reality talent show "Good Night Show - King Maker" (Chinese: 全民造星). Finishing at the round of 20, he made his debut as one of the four members of the pop boy band ERROR, alongside Fatboy (Leung Yip), DeeGor (Dee Ho Kai Wa) and 193 (Denis Kwok Ka Chun); the first single, “404”, was released on 2 December, 2018.[1][2]. In early 2019, the group’s first reality show “ERROR Crazy Trip” (Chinese: 花姐 ERROR 遊) was aired on ViuTV. Ng’s courageous stunts in the show, such as finishing a bowl of ultra-spicy ramen and consuming a raw fish head, earned positive feedback from viewers. His soundbites such as "fast, gulp, and boom" and "only fastness is unbeatable" from the show had become buzz phrases [3][4]. Following the airing of the show’s sequel 2 "ERROR Crazy Trip 2" (Chinese: 花姐 ERROR 遊 2) in September 2019, Ng also gained praises from the audience of ERROR’s debut talk show, "ERROR’s Apologetic Conference: Talking Nonsense as Mid-life Comes" (《人到中年 口不擇言》ERROR道歉招待會), which took place on 2 October, 2019.
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