Draft:Melon Sandbox

Melon Sandbox
Melon Sandbox
	The app icon of the newest version
Developer(s)	TwentySeven
Publisher(s)	TwentySeven(formally) playducky.com(current)
Engine	Unity
Platform(s)	IOS Android
Release	August 27, 2021
Genre(s)	Sandbox
Mode(s)	single-player

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Declined by DoubleGrazing 23 hours ago. Last edited by David notMD 11 hours ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Submission declined on 29 October 2024 by Dan arndt (talk).

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
reliable
secondary
independent of the subject

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This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

Declined by Dan arndt 27 hours ago.

Comment: An official website can be used to verify non-controversial content, but does not count toward independent refs needed to get the draft accepted. David notMD (talk) 02:16, 30 October 2024 (UTC)

Comment: User-generated sources are not considered reliable. Therefore this draft is both insufficiently supported by reliable sources, and presents no credible evidence that the subject is notable. DoubleGrazing (talk) 14:20, 29 October 2024 (UTC)

Comment: Fails WP:GNG - noting Wikis are not acceptable or reliable sources. Dan arndt (talk) 10:09, 29 October 2024 (UTC)

Melon Sandbox was created in August, 27, 2021 by TwentySeven. It’s a free mobile game that lets the player fling objects around and make stories. It’s available on both IOS and Android (operating system).^[1]

History

Melon Sandbox started with just a melon and some other simple objects. The first version of the game is version 1.0^[2]. It soon gain attention and have more and more characters and objects. It also started appearing on YouTube by content creators based on this game. The newest and current version is version 25.0.^[3]

References

^ "Melon Playground". Melon Playground Wiki. Retrieved 2024-10-29.
^ Jeriv (2023-07-26). THE VERY FIRST VERSION of Melon Playground and HOW TO GET IT?. Retrieved 2024-10-29 – via YouTube.
^ "Versions". Melon Playground Wiki. Retrieved 2024-10-29.

[:0-1] "Melon Playground". Melon Playground Wiki. Retrieved 2024-10-29.

[2] Jeriv (2023-07-26). THE VERY FIRST VERSION of Melon Playground and HOW TO GET IT?. Retrieved 2024-10-29 – via YouTube.

[3] "Versions". Melon Playground Wiki. Retrieved 2024-10-29.

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