Draft:Jack O'Sullivan Missing Person

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Comment: Also need proper formatting. Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 00:16, 21 July 2024 (UTC)

Jack O'Sullivan disappeared on the early hours of Saturday 2nd March 2024. Jack was aged 22 at the time of his disappearance and has turned 23 whilst he's been missing.

Jack was attending a party in the Hotwells area of Bristol and after failing to flag down a taxi was making his way home on foot.^[1]

Description

Age: 23 (22 at the time of his disappearance)

Height: 5'10"/178cm

Build: Slim

Hair: Short, Brown

Eyes: Blue^[2]

Last Seen Wearing

• Green/Khaki Barbour Jacket

• Brown Ralph Lauren Trainers

• Navy Blue Chino Style Trousers

• A Cream Knit Lambswool Jumper ^[2]

Items Jack was carrying on his person at the time of disappearance

• Black Cardholder

• Drivers Licence

• Monzo Debit Card

• Silver Coloured Boss Watch

• Grey IPhone 11, in a red silicone case

• House Key

• Peugeot 108 Key Fob ^[1]

None of Jacks belongings have been found to date. ^[1]

Last Sightings

03:17 AM Last confirmed sighting of Jack on CCTV walking onto the grass area at the junction of Brunel Lock Way and Brunel Way, Bristol.

03:25 AM Likely sighting of Jack on the Plimsoll Bridge, heading towards Bristol city centre.

03:39 AM Sighting of Jack walking along Bennet Way, Bristol.

03:40 AM CCTV of Jack walking uo the Bennett Way sliproad towards Hotwells, Bristol. ^[1]

Investigation by Avon & Somerset Police

Police officers have conducted searches on land and water involving multiple teams including:

• Dog Unit

• Drone Unit

• Specialist Dive Team

Over 100 hours of CCTV has been reviewed by officers to date but police are still appealing for anyone whom may have additional footage to come forward and contact the police on 101 using Ref: 5224055172^[3]

The latest statement can be accessed below:

https://www.avonandsomerset.police.uk/news/2024/07/updated-statement-on-our-investigation-into-missing-jack-osullivan/

Press Coverage

https://www.bristolpost.co.uk/news/bristol-news/jack-osullivans-family-complain-police-9424511

https://www.independent.co.uk/news/uk/home-news/jack-osullivan-missing-bristol-cctv-b2573791.html

https://www.bbc.co.uk/news/newsbeat-69004784.amp

https://news.sky.com/story/jack-osullivan-jay-slater-coverage-brought-everything-back-for-mother-of-man-last-seen-in-bristol-13162911