Draft:Fabrizio Ottoboni
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Comment: I have "English-wikipediafied" the draft, and I have made the tone formal enough for a Wikipedia article. Now, there are two major points left that need addressing:1. Notability: The subject may be notable per WP:NPROF if "Notiziario Allergologico" can be deemed a well-established allergology journal. From quickly reading through the matter, I get the impression that said journal exists, but I cannot find evidence that the journal is well-established. Maybe you can elaborate on this.2. Ottoboni's education and career is currently unreferenced. It is plausible enough for me not to delete that piece of information from a draft, but this cannot go into the mainspace (per WP:BLP). Therefore, I have placed a "citation needed". Please fix. Best, --Johannes (Talk) (Contribs) (Articles) 13:02, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
Fabrizio Ottoboni (born 1953 in Vercelli, Italy) is an Italian biologist who specialised in the research and cultivation of allergenic Mites. He has served as the editorial manager of Notiziario Allergologico[1], a journal focused on allergology.
Ottoboni began his career with a diploma from a technical chemistry school before joining Lofarma, a pharmaceutical company in Milan, where he worked until 2017. During his tenure at Lofarma, he pursued and earned a degree in biology from the University of Milan.[2]
His research focused on the cultivation of allergenic mites to create diagnostic tests for identifying allergens and developing immunotherapy treatments for allergic conditions.[3] He helped to develop a new test specifically designed to detect mite antigens in house-dust.[4] One of Ottoboni’s key achievements was the development of a novel test specifically designed to detect Dermatophagoides pteronyssinus (Dp) antigens in household dust.[5] This innovation was instrumental in understanding acarid infestations in domestic environments,[6] as well as in identifying the role of house-dust mite allergens in triggering allergic symptoms in atopic patients.[7] His work was instrumental in identifying Dermatophagoides pteronyssinus as a primary allergen and elucidating its role in allergic respiratory diseases. These findings have been pivotal in advancing diagnostic and therapeutic approaches in allergology.[8]
References
[edit]- ^ "Notiziari Archive". Lofarma spa (in Italian). Retrieved 2024-12-21.
- ^ "Home | Scienze biologiche | Università degli Studi di Milano Statale". scienzebiologiche.cdl.unimi.it. Retrieved 2024-12-21.
- ^ Ottoboni, Fabrizio; Piu, Giovanni (1990). Gli acari allergenici: guida al loro riconoscimento (in Italian). UTET periodici scientifici. ISBN 978-88-85654-07-5.
- ^ Mistrello, G.; Gentili, M.; Roncarolo, D.; Antoniotti, P.; Ottoboni, F.; Falagiani, P. (March 1998). "Dot immunobinding assay for detection of mite antigens in house-dust samples". Journal of Medical Entomology. 35 (2): 143–147. doi:10.1093/jmedent/35.2.143. ISSN 0022-2585. PMID 9538574.
- ^ Mistrello, Gianni; Roncarolo, Daniela; Ottoboni, Fabrizio; Rigamonti, Ivo (1992). "Quantitative determination of Der p I allergen levels in allergenic extracts and house-dust samples". Aereobiologia. 8 (3): 429–434. doi:10.1007/bf02272911. ISSN 0393-5965.
- ^ Witten, Marianne (2018-05-25). "The house dust mite SLIT-tablet is well tolerated in subjects with house dust mite allergic asthma". doi.org. doi:10.26226/morressier.5acdc661d462b8029238d871. Retrieved 2024-12-19.
- ^ Roncarolo, Daniela; Mistrello, Gianni; Centanni, Stefano; Diano, Pierluigi; Ottoboni, Fabrizio; Gentili, Marta; Pugni, Paolo; Falagiani, Paolo (1997-09-01). "Air cleaners can reduce the risk of allergic sensitization". Aerobiologia. 13 (3): 185–189. Bibcode:1997Aerob..13..185R. doi:10.1007/BF02694506. ISSN 1573-3025.
- ^ Ottoboni, F.; Falagiani, P.; Centanni, S. (1984). "[Allergenic Acari]". Bollettino dell'Istituto Sieroterapico Milanese. 63 (5): 389–419. ISSN 0021-2547. PMID 6085002.
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