Draft:Asma Akram
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Asma Akram (Urdu: اسماء اکرم) (29 August 1990), is a Pakistani orthopedic surgeon, notable for being the first woman to earn a Master of Surgery (MS) degree in Orthopedics from the University of Health Sciences, Lahore.[1][2][3][4][5]. Asma has worked across multiple fields within orthopedic surgery, including hand and upper limb surgery, hip and Knee replacement, trauma, and arthroplasty. In July 2024, she successfully defended her MS thesis titled "Comparative Study of Functional Outcome & Union of Medial Malleolus Fracture Treated by 4 mm Lag Screw Versus Tension Band Wiring in Denis Weber Type B and C"[6][7]
Early life and Education
[edit]Born in Sialkot, Akram received her early education at Allama Iqbal Public School in Sialkot. She later pursued a Bachelor of Medicine, Bachelor of Surgery (MBBS) from the University of Health Sciences (UHS), completing her degree in 2015. She continued her academic journey by enrolling in the MS program at Khawaja Muhammad Safdar Medical College, from which she graduated in 2024. Akram is recognized as the first female student to complete her MS in Orthopedic Surgery from this institution.
Career
[edit]Asma began her professional career as a Medical Officer at Idrees Teaching Hospital, Sialkot, in 2016 [8]. In 2017, she joined the Department of Pathology at Khawaja Muhammad Safdar Medical College as a Demonstrator. She completed her postgraduate training in orthopedic surgery between 2018 and 2024. During her training, she worked at several renowned medical institutions, including the Children’s Hospital in Lahore, Combined Military Hospital (CMH) Lahore, and Allama Iqbal Memorial Teaching Hospital in Sialkot.
Her work has focused on a range of orthopedic procedures, including trauma surgery, arthroplasty, and hand and upper limb surgery. She is currently practicing orthopedic surgery at her clinic in Agrics Town, Lahore, where she continues to serve patients.
Contribution to Women in Medicine
[edit]Asma’s achievement in becoming the first female orthopedic surgeon with an MS degree from UHS is regarded as a milestone within the medical community. Her success has been noted for contributing to a growing trend of Pakistani women pursuing careers in specialties traditionally dominated by men. Asma’s career has been highlighted in local media as an example of the evolving role of women in medicine and surgery in Pakistan[9][10][11].[12][13]
References
[edit]- ^ "The News International Newspaper Islamabad". September 2024.
- ^ "Minute Mirror, Pakistan's Independent Daily Newspaper Lahore". 13 September 2024.
- ^ "Daily City 42 Newspaper Cutting". 11 September 2024.
- ^ "Dr. Asma clinches first ever MS degree in country's Orthopedic surgery history from UHS.." The Free Library. 2024 Knowledge Bylanes". 15 September 2024.
- ^ "Daily Nawa-i-Waqt Lahore; Urdu Newspaper Cutting". 12 September 2024.
- ^ "University of Health Sciences – For World Class Professionals". Retrieved 2024-07-29.
- ^ Speciality Advisory Committee in Orthopaedics, UHS. "UHS Link" (PDF).
- ^ ""Southern Cross 2017: Surveying the Cosmos, The Science From Massively Multiplexed Surveys, jointly supported by the Australian Astronomical Observatory (AAO) and the CSIRO Astronomy and Space Science". aat.anu.edu.au". 8 September 2016.
- ^ "Daily City 42 Newspaper Lahore". September 2024.
- ^ "Daily Balochistan Times; 92 News Media Group". 10 September 2024.
- ^ "Daily Sohna Pakistan Newspaper Lahore". September 2024.
- ^ "Academia Mag; First Female Earns MS in Orthopedic Surgery from UHS". September 2024.
- ^ "Daily Nawa-i-Waqt Lahore; Urdu Newspaper". 12 September 2024.