Draft:Adamandi: A New Horror Musical

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Declined by SafariScribe 3 months ago. Last edited by SafariScribe 3 months ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Comment: The first source is an advert, the second is not reliable, the third has nothing to say about the show. I agree with the fourth, though a primary source but it summarizes the plot. Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 18:50, 3 August 2024 (UTC)

Adamandi is a musical written in 2022 by Mel Hornyak (Book/Lyrics) and Elliot Valentine (Book/Lyrics/Music).^[1]

Past Productions

Princeton University

Adamandi premiered on stage in November 2022 at the Berlind Theatre at McCarter Theatre Center.^[1] This show was produced by the Lewis Center for the Arts and directed by Georgina Escobar.^[2]

Awards and Recognitions

Adamandi was a Eugene O'Neill National Music Theater Conference Semifinalist in 2023^[3]

Plot Summary

Three queer students of color at an elite university are nominated for the very prestigious Phaethon Prize during their senior year, a long standing tradition at their school. As they each try to prove their worthiness to a school uninterested in their success, they push passed their physical, mental, and moral limits as they navigate the line between love and obsession.^[2]^[4]

References

^ ^a ^b "Adamandi". Lewis Center for the Arts. Retrieved 2024-07-29.
^ ^a ^b "ADAMANDI (2022-present)". elliot valentine. Retrieved 2024-07-29.
^ "National Music Theater Conference | Eugene O'Neill Theater Center". theoneill. Retrieved 2024-07-29.
^ "ADAMANDI: A Dark Academia Horror Musical, Mel Hornyak, UG '23 and Elliot Lee, UG '23 (2264585)". Princeton University Media Central. Retrieved 2024-07-29.

[:0-1] "Adamandi". Lewis Center for the Arts. Retrieved 2024-07-29.

[:1-2] "ADAMANDI (2022-present)". elliot valentine. Retrieved 2024-07-29.

[3] "National Music Theater Conference | Eugene O'Neill Theater Center". theoneill. Retrieved 2024-07-29.

[4] "ADAMANDI: A Dark Academia Horror Musical, Mel Hornyak, UG '23 and Elliot Lee, UG '23 (2264585)". Princeton University Media Central. Retrieved 2024-07-29.

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