Wikipedia talk:Wikipedia Signpost/2009-05-18/Chemistry data

Physchim62, I like this piece and it will be great for the Signpost. I have a couple suggestions/comments. The title doesn't give much indication of what the article is about, and it actually doesn't become clear what the point is until quite a ways in. Some front-loading of the main idea would be appreciated by readers, I think. The point of codeine and heroin images will be lost on many readers unless they have explanatory captions.--ragesoss (talk) 01:34, 18 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

OK, I think I've covered those points. The last sentence probably needs repolishing after the changes, but I'm going to have to get some sleep soon! Physchim62 (talk) 02:17, 18 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Cool. Thanks.--ragesoss (talk) 02:57, 18 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I really enjoyed this article/essay. Nice job! - Banyan Tree 03:22, 21 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]