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Nowhere in the article does it say that he advocated armed action against the person of Adolf Hitler: the lead section says that he " warnings about the expansionist plans of Germany under Adolf Hitler", very different from appealing for armed action against him. Kevin McE (talk) 13:30, 24 November 2019 (UTC)
- Chetsford, can you help us with this? – Dank (push to talk) 16:32, 24 November 2019 (UTC)
- Kevin McE is correct that "nowhere in the article does it say that he advocated armed action against the person of Adolf Hitler". The TFA hook should be changed from As a proponent of democracy during the 1930s, Moravec appealed for armed action against Adolf Hitler to As a proponent of democracy during the 1930s, Moravec appealed for armed action against Germany which makes it consistent with the article. The article says – double cited – that During a two-hour confrontation with Beneš, Moravec pleaded with the president to declare war against Germany... and not that he pleaded for an attack against the physical body of Adolf Hitler as an individual. Chetsford (talk) 00:23, 25 November 2019 (UTC)
- Thanks, done. - Dank (push to talk) 00:51, 25 November 2019 (UTC)
- Kevin McE is correct that "nowhere in the article does it say that he advocated armed action against the person of Adolf Hitler". The TFA hook should be changed from As a proponent of democracy during the 1930s, Moravec appealed for armed action against Adolf Hitler to As a proponent of democracy during the 1930s, Moravec appealed for armed action against Germany which makes it consistent with the article. The article says – double cited – that During a two-hour confrontation with Beneš, Moravec pleaded with the president to declare war against Germany... and not that he pleaded for an attack against the physical body of Adolf Hitler as an individual. Chetsford (talk) 00:23, 25 November 2019 (UTC)