Wikipedia talk:Peer review/Powderfinger/archive1

"Done" items

• "...entered the mainstream..." in lead, unclear what constitutes mainstream, one man's indie is another man's middle-the-road trash - i.e., it's is a bit POV.  Done 23:32, 26 October 2007 (UTC)

• "Many of Powderfinger's albums reached..." - "Many of Powderfinger's albums have reached..."?  Done 23:32, 26 October 2007 (UTC)

• "...which achieved highly..." - yuck.  Done 23:32, 26 October 2007 (UTC)

• "...predominantly rock, though ranged from soft, bluesy-rock to hard-rock...." - citation for this or is this your own opinion?  Done 23:32, 26 October 2007 (UTC)

• Numbers nine or below should be written out. 10 or more as numbers.  Done 09:37, 31 October 2007 (UTC)

• Order citations numerically, so [29][25] would be better as [25][29].  Done 23:32, 26 October 2007 (UTC)

• "The group has also topped the Triple J Hottest 100 chart twice with nineteen entries in the list in total." - needs citation.  Done 23:32, 26 October 2007 (UTC)

Pending

• "...he decided to dedicate the time towards starting a family..." - citation or this is WP:OR.

  Still tracking sources. ~ Sebi 07:08, 3 November 2007 (UTC)

  Poo. I found nothing so far. Linca, any ideas? — H₂O —  08:31, 3 November 2007 (UTC)