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Addressed comments from Crisco 1492

Comments from Crisco 1492

• Does "was bitterly attacked by Democratic newspapers for allegedly trying to buy the presidency with McKinley as his easily dominated agent." need a comma before with?
• One Democratic representative was absent, out sick, - why the duplication? Just "out sick" perhaps.

First fixed, second changed to "absent due to illness".--Wehwalt (talk) 11:07, 26 July 2012 (UTC)

• "Hanna refused to testify and asked supporters not to." - "... to do the same" perhaps?
• Fix citation needed tag (direct quote).
• All in all not much to do. I've done a little copyediting (mostly non-breaking spaces), be sure to look at that. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 11:34, 26 July 2012 (UTC)

I've fixed those "not to cooperate", I put for Hanna's supporters.--Wehwalt (talk) 11:51, 26 July 2012 (UTC)