Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates/Missing My Baby/archive2

Addressed comments from Erick

Comments:

• Change the title of FN 20 to "Dreaming of You — Selena: Awards".
• Change the title of FN 21 to "Rhythmic Top 40 1995-07-01" and include the date of the chart in the date parameter. Also, you can just use Billboard instead of Billboard.com since it's still Billboard. If that's not possible, then use Billboard.biz instead. Erick (talk) 17:22, 21 October 2012 (UTC)

• All done thanks for the review! Best, Jona^{talk to me} 17:26, 21 October 2012 (UTC)

Addressed comments from TBrandley

Comments

• Any images?

• It's not a single. Jona^{talk to me} 21:29, 25 October 2012 (UTC)

• Why is "song" linked in the infobox and not in the article's prose? Be consistent. I'd personally say that "song" is WP:OVERLINK.

• That's the way the infobox has it, there's no way on unlinking it. Jona^{talk to me} 21:29, 25 October 2012 (UTC)

• "Sun Valley, Los Angeles" should be two separate links, if possible

• Done Jona^{talk to me} 21:29, 25 October 2012 (UTC)

• "A.B. Quintanilla III—her brother—and principal record producer" the end of that makes me think you are going to say a new person, so perhaps say "A.B. Quintanilla III—her brother, who is also the song's principal record producer", or something like that

• Done Jona^{talk to me} 21:29, 25 October 2012 (UTC)

• You say "cross over", the link says "crossover", which?

• Done Jona^{talk to me} 21:29, 25 October 2012 (UTC)

• Can you say the release year for Anthology, as done with Entre a Mi Mundo above in the article

• Done Jona^{talk to me} 21:29, 25 October 2012 (UTC)

• Link Selena in Background and development, as it is its first mention after lead, see WP:REPEATLINK

• Done Jona^{talk to me} 21:29, 25 October 2012 (UTC)

• Same goes for all other words like the very above issue, such as EMI Latin, etc.

• Done Jona^{talk to me} 21:29, 25 October 2012 (UTC)

• Can you explain who "EMI Latin" is for a first time in background and development?

• Done Jona^{talk to me} 21:29, 25 October 2012 (UTC)

• "chose" that's a typo, it is "choose"

• Done Jona^{talk to me} 21:29, 25 October 2012 (UTC)

• "Selena's emotive enunciation was highly praised by contemporary music critics" shouldn't this be in reception, not composition

• Not really because her vocals are part of the songs composition. Jona^{talk to me} 21:29, 25 October 2012 (UTC)

• ""Missing My Baby" received a positive response from music critics" should be ""Missing My Baby" received positive reviews from music critics"

• Done Jona^{talk to me} 21:29, 25 October 2012 (UTC)

• I don't think you need "music critics" in the article anywhere, just "critics", as music there is repetitive and redundant, as well as unnecessary

• Done Jona^{talk to me} 21:29, 25 October 2012 (UTC)

• Can "VH1" be quickly be explained in critical reception and legacy?

• Like "Music channel, VH1..."? Wouldn't that "music" be too repetitive? Jona^{talk to me} 21:29, 25 October 2012 (UTC)

• "ex-friend" doesn't sound right for Wikipedia, perhaps "ex-partner", or something like that

• Done Jona^{talk to me} 21:29, 25 October 2012 (UTC)

• "Billboard reported it" reported what? The song?

• Done Jona^{talk to me} 21:29, 25 October 2012 (UTC)

• Link Billboard in table per WP:REPEATLINK

• Done Jona^{talk to me} 21:29, 25 October 2012 (UTC)

• Table doesn't meet WP:ACCESS, add scope cols and rows to ensure it does

• Not Done per the last peer review. Jona^{talk to me} 21:29, 25 October 2012 (UTC)

• Table doesn't meet WP:DTT, add a table caption to ensure it does

• Done Jona^{talk to me} 21:29, 25 October 2012 (UTC)

• Don't use doubled quotes (") in reference titles, use single quotes ('), in reference titles or in quotes explaining where it is in the reference, example, ""Clack, Cary: "A single of hers that is played on non-Tejano stations, 'Missing My Baby,' displays her wonderful vocal and emotional range and may become a posthumous hit."" there are double quotes inside double quotes, those should be changed to single quotes in all references this applies to, as per WP:MOSQUOTE and MOS:QUOTEMARKS

• Done Jona^{talk to me} 21:29, 25 October 2012 (UTC)

• Any external links?

• Can't find any. Jona^{talk to me} 21:29, 25 October 2012 (UTC)

• Categories should be sorted in alphabetical order

• Done Jona^{talk to me} 21:29, 25 October 2012 (UTC)

TBrandley 17:36, 23 October 2012 (UTC)