Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/Call of Duty 2

Call of Duty 2

This needs a little bit of cleanup (especially the Multiplayer section, sheesh) and reliable citation. It could also use a little bit more information. I'm sure we could make this top 10 X360 game a FA! (In other words, please review, but more importantly please help!) — Ilyan e p (Talk) 18:29, 2 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I changed some of the outgoing links as notes to actual inline citations, will convert the rest in a bit here :-) --light darkness^(talk) 18:19, 3 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I changed them to <references />

Here are some style considerations:

The reviews section should cite who says what, instead of "some said" and "others say" it would be better to write which magazine/homepage (IGN or what not) represent that view of the game.
References should be much more clear, mentioning where they were published and who the author is.
The gallery section might be spread out through the article, inserted at points where they are mentioned - that would make a much more compelling article.
The external links section should really be weeded out - having a general site like xboxdream.com as a link gives nothing to the article.

I hope you find this useful, Poulsen 07:56, 6 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks. What I've done so far is re-done a few of the references sections in order to include "IGN:..." instead of just "Call of Duty 2 Review". I dispersed the screenshots in the article, and it's a lot less boring this way. I'm about to weed out the external links section. — Ilyan e p (Talk) 02:48, 15 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]