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Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 03:18, 7 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Cyclonebiskit

Comments

  • Improve the lead, the two sentences sticking out is strange. It also has a generic start, try to make it more original
  • A tropical wave emerged from the west coast of Africa on August 30, and maintaining a vigorous area along the wave axis, the wave tracked westward across the Atlantic Ocean. vigorous area of what?
  • By September 1, most of the deep convection had been stripped away by southwesterly wind shear. However, the wave remained well-defined as it continued towards the west-northwest. I'm a bit confused by this, how can it be well-defined if it's convection has been stripped away?
  • Link center of circulation in the second paragraph
  • Around the end of the second paragraph, you seem to ramble on about the trough, not sure what to say about it, but it seems strange
  • Did very little happen between it's peak intensity and becoming extratropical? It looks rather short (IMO)
    • Well, it went from peak strength to tropical depression in a single day, so there's not much more to say.

Cyclonebiskit (talk) 03:28, 7 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the comments. –Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 15:42, 7 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]