Wikipedia:WikiProject Tropical cyclones/Assessment/Hurricane Hernan (2002)

Hurricane Hernan (2002)

Archived discussion. Current status: {{GA-Class}}

One of my GAs that I believe are A-class worthy. Juliancolton ^Tropical ^Cyclone 18:19, 9 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I disagree. The prose isn't up to par, IMO. The opening sentence is awkward "northwest several hundred miles west", not to mention very interesting. Also, if you're going to keep it how it is, "Category 5 hurricane" needs a link, since it provided no context as the first piece of information in the entire article. Writing in the SH could be better. "re-emerging in the eastern Pacific" - that was the first time it entered the EPAC. "the first Dvorak classifications" - no where in the source does it say that was the first Dvorak classification on the storm. Watch your conversions, and make sure metric values are included. It needs some work. ♬♩ Hurricanehink (talk) 18:27, 9 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Done. Anything else? Juliancolton ^Tropical ^Cyclone 19:11, 10 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

No, not done. There is still the problem of no source about "first Dvorak classifications", and there are still some units without metric conversions. ♬♩ Hurricanehink (talk) 01:22, 12 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Support as A but not a FA - This article looks almost ready. I would give it a thorough copyedit before A-classing it though.^Mitch 32 ^contribs 14:15, 11 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]