Wikipedia:WikiProject Ships/Peer review/RMS Titanic

RMS Titanic

This article has been worked on with an aim of improving it to Featured Article status. Changes in content and layout have been done but I know that more is needed.Shinerunner (talk) 12:18, 10 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Brad101

Did a quick look and the obvious things would be more inline citations, there are several paragraphs without any.
The article sections need to be redone so that they follow an order of first event to last event of the ship. And then the analytic sections should follow. There might be some sections that should be split off into articles of their own.
Make sure all photos have valid and complete permissions.
Trim down external links and see also sections. In a perfect world, an FA should not have any see also section.
Trivia or pop culture sections are magnets for a never ending supply of trash being inserted into the article. Try to work trivia mentions into the main article where they apply.
Recommend that you set your sights on GA first and go from there. The GA to A to FA helps shake out bugs along the way. --Brad (talk) 23:01, 10 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]