Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/John Watts de Peyster
This article was apparently began as a "throw away" by another editor who was covering the boot monument. I've tried to add as much as possible. I'd love some feedback on what further direction (if any) I should take, and what should be done to get this to GA class at least. I would love as much feedback as possible, I own many of the reference materials I cited. MrPrada 03:22, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
Kirill Lokshin
[edit]This is very nice, overall. A few suggestions:
- The lead could stand to be lengthened; two or three full paragraphs is basically the expected standard now.
"THE DECISIVE CONFLICTS OF THE LATE CIVIL WAR, OR SLAVEHOLDERS REBELLION" doesn't need to be given in all-caps; we aren't bound to the typographical conventions of nineteenth-century printers.The "See also" section should be eliminated; the only term there is already linked in the text.The ACW template at the bottom is rather excessively large, particularly given that Peyster isn't even linked from it. I'd suggest replacing it with{{portal|American Civil War}}, which will provide the same content one link removed.