Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/Battle of Changban
I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like to know if this article has any possibility of being a GA or maybe a FA, and recommendations. Thanks, Armando.Otalk • Ev 01:02, 6 November 2007 (UTC)
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Kirill Lokshin
[edit]Everything has a possibility of making FA (eventually); but there's still quite a bit of work to be done here before you're really ready for that:
- Citations! An article that's not thoroughly cited stands no chance at all of passing FAC, or even GAN. I'd suggest focusing on this as your top priority.
- The repetition of names in the "Combatants" and "Commanders" fields in the infobox is somewhat clunky; I'd suggest, at the least, changing the combatants to be "Forces of Cao Cao" and "Forces of Liu Bei".
- The lead should be quite a bit longer.
- After the major issues are resolved, some thorough copyediting will likely be needed; there are some pretty rough spots in the prose.
Hope that helps! Kirill 04:37, 10 November 2007 (UTC)