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Article promoted. Anotherclown (talk) 07:08, 9 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

SMS Oldenburg

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Nominator(s): Parsecboy (talk)


Since I have the time, now that the semester is over, let's see if I can handle another ACR at the same time. This is the last German dreadnought-type battleship to grace the ACR pages. As usual, thanks in advance to all who take the time to review the article, I look forward to working with you. Parsecboy (talk) 12:28, 9 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

  • The caption for File:Bundesarchiv Bild 134-B2656, Linienschiff Oldenburg, Kaiser Wilhelm II..jpg could use a year.
  • Please be consistent about including OCLC numbers in the references.
  • The infobox differs from the Lead in the presentation of "Helgoland class" vs "Helgoland-class"
  • Recommend changing the "Footnotes" section to "Notes" since it has a subheader with the same name.
Just minor things. —Ed!(talk) 00:14, 11 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Should all be taken care of, thanks again Ed. Parsecboy (talk) 13:26, 13 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Support —Ed!(talk) 20:36, 13 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

SupportComments by MisterBee1966

  • Fixed now.

Support on prose per standard disclaimer. These are my edits. - Dank (push to talk) 04:31, 15 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Support Comments

  • Clarify in the lede that it fought against the Imperial Russian Navy, not just the Russian Navy.
  • Clarify that the oil was sprayed on the coal lest readers think that she no longer burnt coal at all.
  • Need cites in the infobox or a short paragraph covering armor in the description (preferred)
  • You might consider starting stubs on the various squadrons of the HSF not already begun. Covering their composition at certain dates would be useful.
  • Add # and type of boilers to description.
  • VTE engines use ihp, not shp. Also need to add to descriptive paragraph. Or cite.
  • I expect that these comments generally apply to your other ACR so go ahead and make the necessary changes there as well.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:48, 16 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

CommentsSupport

  • I've made some edits consistent with my review of Thuringen, feel free to revert if I've got it wrong.
  • in Subsequent operations, it appears you still need to substitute Oldenburg for Thuringen in a couple of spots in the second para?
  • can you clarify whether the Oldenburg crew participated in the mutiny?

Peacemaker67 (send... over) 03:05, 18 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Co-ord comment: has Peacemaker's final comment been dealt with? If so, this review can probably be closed. Regards, AustralianRupert (talk) 09:24, 3 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Not yet. Regards, Peacemaker67 (send... over) 10:19, 3 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
But see above. Peacemaker67 (send... over) 02:55, 8 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

  • Is the installed power right? Seems kind of low - it doesn't match the class article (prose/infobox).
  • Infobox: the designed displacement, complement are uncited.Kirk (talk) 20:31, 3 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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