Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Assessment/SMS Kaiser Friedrich III

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SMS Kaiser Friedrich III

Nominator(s): Parsecboy (talk)

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It's been a little while since the last German battleship graced the Milhist ACR page, but seeing as this one's sister ships are all FAs, I thought it was time to get around to rewriting it. Thanks to all who take the time to review the article. Parsecboy (talk) 14:15, 7 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Support Comments: G'day, Parsecboy, nice work as usual. I have a few minor comments/observations: AustralianRupert (talk) 06:46, 9 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

inconsistent: " 13,000 metric horsepower (12,822 ihp; 9,561 kW)..." (in the body of the article) v. "13,000 PS (12,820 ihp; 9,560 kW)" (infobox)
- Fixed the rounding error
(in the body) "twelve machine guns" --> should "1-pdr" be included here for consistency with the infobox?
- Good idea
inconsistent: "She was scrapped in 1920" (in the lead) v. "Scrapped in 1919" (in the infobox)
- Fixed
I think the images would be more visually appealing if the borders were cropped from: "File:Die Gartenlaube (1887) b 517.jpg", "File:S.M. Linienschiff Kaiser Friedrich III.jpg"
- I'll have to address that later - am traveling for the holiday so I don't have access to my home system.
"a foray toward Gotland to catch Russian warships" --> "a foray toward Gotland to attack Russian warships"?
- Sounds fine to me.
"Two days later, the fleet arrived off Gotland to show the German flag, and was back in Kiel by 30 December" --> was any action fought? If not, it is probably best to say so, given it seems they went there looking to engage the Russians?
- Good idea - I've clarified that
in the References, is there an ISSN or OCLC (or similar) for the R.U.S.I. Journal?
- Added
same as above for Notes on Naval Progress?
- Added
"United States. Office of Naval Intelligence" --> is the full stop a typo here?
- Yes, good catch
this seems inconsistent: "Ratingen, DE" v. "Bonn"
- Fixed. Thanks for your very thorough review! Parsecboy (talk) 14:00, 25 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Support on prose per my standard disclaimer. These are my edits. - Dank (push to talk) 20:28, 10 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks as always, Dan - everything looks good to me. Parsecboy (talk) 14:00, 25 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Support by Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 05:04, 27 November 2016 (UTC) This article is in fine shape, I have made a few minor tweaks and only have one minor quibble.[reply]

the infobox lists a range for the belt armor, but only the maximum is detailed in the body
- Fixed, good catch. Parsecboy (talk) 12:48, 28 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Image review

File:S.M. Linienschiff Kaiser Friedrich III.jpg -- author's date of death?
- Added.
File:Die Gartenlaube (1887) b 517.jpg -- ditto?
- This one is tricky - the caption credits the photo to a "Th. Politzky", but I can't find anything on him. When I crop the border, I might have to upload it locally, since it is definitely PD in the US even without the date of death.
  - Actually, the illustration was just based on Politzky's photograph - there's a signature on the drawing itself that I can't make out, but it doesn't appear to be the same as the author of the article it came from. Parsecboy (talk) 16:47, 28 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]
File:Kaiser Friedrich III..jpg -- link to source seems to need updating.
- Replaced.

Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 13:52, 28 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks, Ian. Parsecboy (talk) 16:07, 28 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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