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Project E

Nominator(s): Hawkeye7 (talk)

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The title says it all. When this article was created in November 2008, it was immediately nominated for deletion as a hoax. It wasn't. More recently I have expanded it. Hawkeye7 (talk) 10:14, 13 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

~~Comments~~Support by Peacemaker67

I reviewed this article for GAN and it is in good shape. I think that it needs some greater precision around the nomenclature of the bombers used under this project. It uses "V-bombers" as an umbrella term to refer to them, but at one point Canberra's were used as well. I think it would be better to use "strategic and tactical bombers" or something similar to refer to the bombers that were used when it is a more general reference, and only use "V-bombers" where it just refers to the Valiant, Vulcan etc that were actually V-bombers. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 10:28, 13 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]
I've only used "V-bombers" to refer to the Valiant, Vulcan and Victor. I've tried to make it clear that Canberra was not a V-bomber. Is there some wording anywhere in the article from which a reader might infer that Canberra was a V-bomber? Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:08, 13 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Well, for example, there is "The Minister of Defence, Harold Macmillan, determined that the V-bomber force" when it seems clear that Canberra's were being considered for the role at the time, not just the planned V-bombers. Did Macmillan say "V-bombers" or was he more generic? Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 07:51, 14 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]
No, he said "V-bombers" and Canberras were not being considered at all. Hawkeye7 (talk) 11:47, 14 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]
OK, it must just be me. Supporting. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 02:54, 29 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Support Comments: Nice work, I have the following suggestions: AustralianRupert (talk) 12:48, 28 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

in the lead, "for the V-bombers, the British strategic bombers..." --> "for the V-bomber fleet, the British strategic bombers..."?
Done Hawkeye7 (talk) 07:28, 6 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]
in the lead, "based in Germany and the United Kingdom and assigned to NATO..." --> "based in Germany and the United Kingdom, which were assigned to NATO"?
Done Hawkeye7 (talk) 07:28, 6 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]
in the lead, "until 1977, superseded by the Lance missile..." --> "until 1977, when it was superseded by the Lance missile"?
Done Hawkeye7 (talk) 07:28, 6 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]
in the References, Nuclear weapons-free world? : Britain, Trident and the Challenges Ahead --> Nuclear Weapons-Free World?: Britain, Trident and the Challenges Ahead?
Done Hawkeye7 (talk) 07:28, 6 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]
in the body, suggest rewording: "four fell short, which is always regrettable but particularly so when nuclear weapons are involved..." --> perhaps just highlight the risk that this theoretically posed to own troops
Done Hawkeye7 (talk) 07:28, 6 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]
suggest further tweaking it to "four fell short. In view of the danger this posed to friendly troops, as well as the other limitations, a new British project was launched to develop a better missile..." (not a warstoper, though...the wording that is, but I guess it might be if one actually did drop a nuke on the FLOT. Okay, sorry, bad joke... ) Regards, AustralianRupert (talk) 11:03, 6 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]
During an exercise in the early 1960s, the GOC BAOR accidentally called in a nuclear strike on his own headquarters, and a signals failure prevented the order being rescinded. Fortunately, it was just an exercise, and no harm was done, except to reputations. Hawkeye7 (talk) 12:40, 6 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]
"warheads were supplied 1960" --> "warheads were supplied in 1960"
Done Hawkeye7 (talk) 07:28, 6 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Support
- All tool checks ok (i.e. no dabs, external links work, no citation errors, no duplicate links, Earwig tool reveals no issues with copyright violation or close paraphrase [1]).
- Prose looks good to me after a complete read through (although I agree with AR's comments above).
- I made a few minor changes per the MOS [2].
- Article seems to provide a through overview of the topic and is well referenced.
- Images look to all be either PD or appropriately licenced and have the req'd info as far as I can see. Captions seem ok.
- There is some overlinking of Margaret Gowing, Lorna Arnold and Richard G. Hewlett in the reference section which could probably be removed per WP:REPEATLINK. Anotherclown (talk) 01:49, 29 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  Done Hawkeye7 (talk) 07:28, 6 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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