Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Assessment/Dr John Forrest (1804-1865)

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Withdrawn by nominator. HJ Mitchell | Penny for your thoughts? 03:31, 4 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Dr John Forrest (1804-1865)

Nominator(s): Gilesforrest (talk)

I am nominating this article for A-Class review because it has been significantly updated since previous B review, addressing the citation style and source issues. Appreciate feedback on how to improve it further. Gilesforrest (talk) 22:46, 29 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Oppose

Title doesn't follow MOS, as does much of the whole article.
It's got unaddressed hatnotes. These alone warrant the failure of a GAN, let alone an ACR. --Sp33dyphil ©^hat_ontributions 07:39, 1 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comment - Nice work on the article so far, but it needs some more polishing before it's ready for A-class, including formatting and a citation needed tag or two. This being your first article, I strongly suggest you take it to get a History peer review first, that way you can iron out most of these issues and have an easier time at A-class review, and later at WP:FAC if you plan on going there. You might also consider putting it up for a Good Article review before bringing it here, as that can be another very useful way to get problems fixed. Parsecboy (talk) 13:54, 1 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for comments so far, I've made changes as suggested and have submitted for peer review as accept this isn't ready for A-class yet! Gilesforrest (talk) 16:26, 2 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Oppose
As mentioned above, here are a range of issues that need addressing; if you fancy putting it up for GAR after its been through peer review, though, I will keep an eye out for it and happily review. Hchc2009 (talk) 19:57, 2 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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