Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Josias Philip Hoffman
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This article is part of a series of Orange Free State biographies. This biography on a South African Boer politician from the nineteenth century has been completely rewritten. However, information from published sources is scarce. Therefore, we are looking for a class=Start in both Projects listed, with a view to class=B. Review comments are heartily invited. Michel Doortmont (talk) 22:25, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
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- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as it could be. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.[?]
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, DrKiernan (talk) 12:40, 2 April 2008 (UTC)