Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/David E. Kelley
I have done a complete rewrite of this article, including the addition of filmography, table of tv shows and awards. I would like to get this into shape for at least a GA rating with an eye towards making it a featured article. Therefore 18:27, 11 April 2007 (UTC)
- I would expand a bit more the lead per WP:LEAD.
- "Born in Waterville, Maine, raised in Boston, Kelley was the son of a hockey coach[1] and played the game himself." Try, wherever possible, to have the citations at the end of the sentences.
- "Kelley was the son of a hockey coach." His mother? Do we know their names?
- You use many fair-use tagged photos. This might (or might not!) be a problem in WP:FAC.
- "Towards the end of the fifth season in 1999, facing cancellation, Kelley fired all cast members added since he had left the show, brought back Mandy Patinkin and began writing episodes again." Had this change any positive effects?
- "Casting" is uncited.
- You have seperate criticism for each show. Maybe some of it should be incorporated in the relevant articles. In any case, I would like to have criticism about his work, his writing, his talent as a whole.--Yannismarou 19:11, 12 April 2007 (UTC)