Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/A-class review/Annika Sörenstam
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The result was pass.
Having reached Good Article status and having undergone a peer review, this article has received significant copy edit changes and is now thought to be now an A class article. Mudforce (talk) 19:59, 28 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Reluctantly support. Nicely written and well-researched, although sometimes I feel overwhelmed by the amount of data and statistics (this is a problem I often encounter in athletes' bios). Personally I also do not like these long rows of citations one after the other (e.g.: "Associated Press voted her Female Athlete of the Year for the third consecutive year and she became the first woman to win the Golf Writers’ Trophy twice in the 55-year history of European golf’s most prestigious award.[66][67][68][69][70][71][72]"). Maybe Sandy's method in Tourette syndrome could be a nice idea. And the prose is not everywhere brilliant (choppy: "They met in 1994 in Phoenix, Arizona, where Esch worked for Ping and were engaged at the 1995 Evian Masters. They divorced in 2006. [57][113] She announced her engagement to Mike McGee ... "--Yannismarou (talk) 16:50, 18 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Copy edit changes made re suggestions above Mudforce (talk) 22:42, 19 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Support with changes. John Carter (talk) 14:30, 26 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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