Wikipedia:WikiProject Aviation/Peer review/CAF Rocky Mountain Wing Museum

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CAF Rocky Mountain Wing Museum

I've listed this article for peer review because it relates to operable Grumman TBM Avenger WWII torpedo bombers and museums. This is my first "new" Wiki page, but I am quite familiar with website design. The wiki page is quite sparse now as I was unsure about interpreting the guidelines pertaining to wiki content where a website link will suffice. I will certainly endeavor to modify as suggested by the peer group.

Thanks,

- Dunc Airbase1 (talk) 23:19, 11 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Fnlayson

The article looks alright overall. But there is more text on each flying aircraft than on the museum itself. If info is available add more on the history and description of the museum. Try to put more of the text in sections. Other museum articles such as National Air and Space Museum, Wings Over the Rockies Air and Space Museum, and Intrepid Sea-Air-Space Museum may give you some ideas. -Fnlayson (talk) 22:03, 18 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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