Wikipedia:Today's featured article/requests/Fort Dobbs (North Carolina)
Fort Dobbs (North Carolina)
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The result was: scheduled for Wikipedia:Today's featured article/February 27, 2013 by BencherliteTalk 15:14, 14 February 2013 (UTC)
Nominator comment: Promoted today (I don't think the bots have gotten around to doing their work, but see Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Featured log/February 2013 for log. I think it's safely under 1,200 chars with spaces, and my points assessment as a newbie is that it's at 4 points as follows: 1 point - Date relevant to article topic (Feb 27 is the date of the Fort's only engagement); 1 point - The requestor is a significant contributor to the article, and has not previously had an article appear as Today's featured article; 2 points - A similar article has not been featured on the main page within 6 months (I checked: there are articles about castles, about battles in the 1600's and 1800's, etc.; I didn't see any French and Indian War, frontier fort, American colonial topics, etc. There were some historic buildings, but none that seemed similar to me). Cdtew (talk) 16:23, 8 February 2013 (UTC)
- Comment Under the section "Decline and fall of Anglo-Cherokee relations" the lead sentence reads, "During the Anglo-Cherokee War, a theater contemporaneous with the later years of the French and Indian War..." Here the word "theater" is used incorrectly. A theater is a large area of military operations. It is a place, and not a time as suggested by the wording of the sentence. For instance, in the Seven Years' War two of the theaters of operation were the European Theater and the North American Theater (and in the latter theater, most Americans have named the conflict the French and Indian War). The easiest fix is to remove the word theater: "During the Anglo-Cherokee War, which occurred during the later years of the French and Indian War..." Sarnold17 (talk) 21:07, 12 February 2013 (UTC)
- Done/Response You're right that it was used incorrectly. At some point, though, that became a compromise for a dispute involving how to fit this in with the larger F&I war, that somehow became the consensus and stuck. I've changed it to read as you suggest. It's tough, because it's not strictly a sub-conflict, as the Cherokee weren't per se on the side of the French, but it's related. Explaining that takes up too much room, though, so letting the reader figure that out is probably best. Cdtew (talk) 22:12, 12 February 2013 (UTC)
- Support. - Nice work! GabeMc (talk|contribs) 00:52, 13 February 2013 (UTC)
- Support. - A nice piece on pre-revolutionary N. America. Thanks for the good work. Sarnold17 (talk) 12:17, 13 February 2013 (UTC)