Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 October 2
Sojourner27 (talk) 01:58, 2 October 2011 (UTC)
I'm starting this new article about a possible democratic nominee for the Govenor of New Hampshire in 2012, but there is another Mark Connolly in Wikipedia. I am looking for feedback on my article thus far and guidance on how to distinguish this Mark Connolly from the others.
Keynotebook (talk) 03:43, 2 October 2011 (UTC)
I'm starting this new article about a possible democratic nominee for the Govenor of New Hampshire in 2012, but there is another Mark Connolly in Wikipedia. I am looking for feedback on my article thus far and guidance on how to distinguish this Mark Connolly from the others.
Keynotebook (talk) 03:44, 2 October 2011 (UTC)
Thanks for your information. I 'll go there soon.
Bambangaslee (talk) 11:00, 2 October 2011 (UTC)
Hi there
This wikipedia article titled Manzoor Alam- is about a criminal lawyer from Rajasthan, India. He played a non-trivial role in the community of Tonk, a place where he was based and practiced Law. This article highlights his work for the community of Tonk before India attained independence as well as his work for the larger community of the of Rajasthan post Indian independence.
My question is: I have cited two sources for this article. The first is from a book which is the biography of the subject Manzoor Alam by Dr. Nazira Mahmood and the other is a letter which is stored in the India House Library of the India House Commission. These are the only two sources I have available to support the article. The sources are reliable and primary sources. Do you see any reason for the article being deleted on the basis of it having only two reliable sources?
Aimz786 (talk) 14:19, 2 October 2011 (UTC)
I'd like to have someone just take a quick scan-through and verify NPOV, and any mistakes, suggestions, etc. Please let me know. Thank you.
Ncboy2010 (talk) 14:24, 2 October 2011 (UTC)
I would like to be assisted so that I may be able to add my article titled 'Alcohol abuse within th youth system of Namibia' to your wikipedia site. The information has been writen by my ideas except for the relevant actual comments which I have referenced from local newspapers. I have also created a website using gmail where i have put the same information but in greater detail incase of confusion of copyrighting my official website is https://sites.google.com/site/sfakwaake2/. I look forwards to hearing from you as to what could be made to improve my article. Cheers
Shikongo Akwaake
Akwaake22 (talk) 16:15, 2 October 2011 (UTC)
Please review this article and send your feedback. Thanks!
74.70.8.160 (talk) 19:23, 2 October 2011 (UTC)
Kbsanjay (talk) 20:56, 2 October 2011 (UTC)
This is my first Wikipedia article. I need to get it published then add an image. As you can imagine, I am happy to have gotten this far along with it. The biggest challenge has been adding an image. I look forward to your input and feedback on the content. I have been given a very specific image to post. https://www.facebook.com/media/set/?set=a.128359753932610.17265.121920591243193&saved#!/photo.php?fbid=131105823658003&set=a.128359753932610.17265.121920591243193&type=1&theater Thank you!
Jmmedia2011 (talk) 21:50, 2 October 2011 (UTC)