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New Madrid County

Feedback on History?

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/New_Madrid_County,_Missouri —Preceding unsigned comment added by 72.174.30.10 (talk) 10:45, 5 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

It looks to me like the history section was lifted from here. At a minimum, attribution is needed. The linked site is called "free", I'll have to check as to its copyright status. Not sure it qualifies as a reliable source.--SPhilbrick T 11:31, 5 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I brought this up at the RS noticeboard. If it passes there (which I doubt), the next step it to clarify the copyright status.--SPhilbrick T 11:57, 5 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Configuration graphs (computer science-computatial complexity)

I put as a "draft" a new article, I think it is interesting because it is a tool often use in computational complexity, a field of computer science, but I'm not sure if I did things correctly. Since it's my first article, I would really like a feedback. Configuration graph

And if you can also tell me on my page when you wrote the feedback, it would help me, so I would be sure to see the notification next time I connect on wikipédia. Arthur MILCHIOR (talk) 13:46, 5 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I did a little cleanup. Just FYI, it makes more sense to ask for notification at your talk page. For example, I'll add this note to your talk page, and you will see an obvious notification next time you log on. I'm going to contact someone else who may be better equipped to provide feedback.--SPhilbrick T 16:29, 5 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Spring of St. Anna, Rivne region, Ukraine

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Spring_of_St._Anna,_Rivne_region,_Ukraine

The article is about spring of St. Anna which is located one kilometer from the village Onyshkivtsi, Rivne region and on the eastern outskirts of the village Lishnia, Ternopil region, Ukraine. The spring of St. Anna is a hydrological nature monument of local importance. Stable water temperature is 6С (43F). This temperature remains the same, regardless of season. The spring of St. Anna is protected by the government.

Olesya80 (talk) 14:26, 5 June 2010 (UTC) olesya80 June 5, 2010[reply]

Nice article with nice pictures.

It needs a little work, but not too much:

Think paragraphs - the History section is too long for a singe paragraph
References are important. While you have listed some, they aren't formed as references, but merely as external links. See WP:CITE and footnotes for help
You have a link to another Wikimedia site. I'm not sure how those should be done—I hope Wikipedia:InterWikimedia links helps--SPhilbrick T 17:00, 5 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I fixed interwiki and categories, will review content/grammar/references in a few days. East of Borschov (talk) 05:22, 8 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]