Wikipedia:Portal peer review/Indiana/archive1

Portal:Indiana

Searchme/Joe did a great job of getting The Indiana Portal up and running. I went ahead and filled some spaces to move it along. What else does it need to get it ready for a featured portal nom? RichardF (talk) 20:49, 21 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

The multiple pictures in the Intro could be randomly displayed one at a time, like in Portal:Iceland. Cirt (talk) 00:14, 22 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Yes, but as it turns out, this particular arrangement comes very close to a golden spiral! That's an interesting notion to ponder in and of itself. ;-) RichardF (talk) 03:38, 22 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  - I don't follow you, what do you mean as it relates to this portal? Cirt (talk) 04:17, 22 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]
    - I mean it's more interesting to me than arbitrarily displaying the three symbols individually in random order. RichardF (talk) 05:02, 22 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]
      - That's what I thought you meant - okay, either way. Like I said below, overall the portal is great, these were just some minor points I could think of. Cirt (talk) 05:30, 22 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]
        Okay, thanks. I wait a while to see if anyone else has anything to say. RichardF (talk) 12:43, 22 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]
        Well, you got me on this one too! I randomized most of the state symbols into the intro. RichardF (talk) 20:31, 22 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Portal:Indiana/Selected article/1 blurb is a little short compared to the length of the others in that section, maybe cut the others down to an arbitrary size so they are all uniform, or expand that one? Cirt (talk) 00:14, 22 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- I lengthened it. RichardF (talk) 03:38, 22 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Personally I think it looks better if all images in Did you know... are at the top, w/ accompanying hook at the top. Cirt (talk) 00:14, 22 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- I tried it, but reserve the edit button to move them around again on a whim. ;-) RichardF (talk) 03:38, 22 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Could stand to display a couple more 'Related portals as clickable images, not just text links, besides just the two. Cirt (talk) 00:14, 22 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- The featured state portals (bold italics) either ignore the other states completely Portal:Texas, or are woefully out of date Portal:Illinois & Portal:Utah. I went for a reasonable middle ground. RichardF (talk) 03:38, 22 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  - Okay, I broke down and added cute little flags to all the state portals! :-) RichardF (talk) 18:40, 22 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Topics icon could be moved to upper right corner. Cirt (talk) 00:14, 22 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- I moved it up a bit. RichardF (talk) 03:38, 22 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Just my thoughts, overall the portal looks great. Excellent work. Cirt (talk) 00:14, 22 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks, :-) RichardF (talk) 03:38, 22 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]