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I've listed YuYu Hakusho for peer review because I've tried to do extensive work on the article this past year. I'm relatively new to writing about anime articles, so I need some guidance. I lack pretty much any and all print material and have relied mostly on online sources for citation, so any feedback on how the article can be improved as is would be appreciated.
Thanks, Hibana 00:54, 8 December 2009 (UTC)
Comments from Tintor2 (talk) The article looks very good, I'll see what else I can comment:
- The encyclopedia section from Anime News Network is not a reliable source since it's user edited.
- Urls from amazon contain unnecessary parts: for example "http://www.amazon.com/Yu-Hakusho-Spirit-Detective-Yusuke/dp/B00005T30G/ref=sr_1_6/103-3991382-5456658?ie=UTF8&s=dvd&qid=1194325422&sr=8-6" can be changed to "http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00005T30G/"
- The production section seems good so it doesn't seem to need the tag.
- Some references from the volumes need to be formatted in cite book template.
- In a recent GA, I have been told that Comipress is not a reliable source (though it wasn't discussed yet).
- Comment: I've seen sales numbers ranging from 40 to 47 million copies, but all from unreliable sources. I will leave it until a discussion takes place or I find a more substantial figure. ~ Hibana 20:31, 11 December 2009 (UTC)
- Some parts from the plot section seem unnecessary. For example, the first paragraph completely describes Yusuke's relationships. It could simply start with "In an uncharacteristic act of altruism, street-brawling delinquent Yusuke Urameshi is hit by a car and killed, saving a young boy by pushing him out of the way." Then, Keiko can be described when she Yusuke has to revive as she plays an important part in that situation. If some characters are not very important for the plot, they don't need to be mentioned here.Tintor2 (talk) 00:42, 13 December 2009 (UTC)
Comments from Extremepro (talk · contribs)
- Add alternate text to the infobox picture.
- Translate references titles into English using trans_title, making sure not to use square brackets cause it ruins it.
- Refs 44, 46, 47 need to say that they are in Japanese.
- adjacent wikilinks as seen in Nielsen ratings and Cartoon Network can be misleading to the viewer. Rearrange the sentence?
Comment from KrebMarkt
About File:YuYu Hakusho volume 1.jpg and only about it.
- Can you explain why replaced Japanese cover with English cover? I wonder on which guidelines you made that decision
- The FUR is screwed up as it was suitable for the Japanese cover and not for English cover. So it will fail in case of a GA review.
For information replacing Japanese with English equivalent or the reverse without proper discussion and consensus to do so can be now reverted since that discussion.Resolved. --KrebMarkt 10:34, 10 December 2009 (UTC)