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I've listed this article for peer review because... GA attempt. Look for thinsg that dont make sense, bad prose, anything i got wrong or could write better etc etc etc. thanks
Thanks, Chchcheckit (talk) 17:39, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
Quick skim by TheWikiToby
[edit]It showcases an fast, heavy and aggressive sound
Change "an" to "a""No Saving Me" is a power ballad[18][26] similar to earlier Walls of Jericho songs "Angel" and "To Be Contined...",
Is Contined supposed to be spelt like that?From July 1 to August 13, 2006, performed on the second stage of the Ozzfest Tour,[38]
Forgot to say that Walls of Jericho was performing right? TheWikiToby (talk) 20:40, 11 August 2024 (UTC)