Wikipedia:Peer review/Winston Duke/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because I have begun working on this article (but am not far into editing) and am aiming to bring this up to GA. If this does get promoted, it'll be my first article I've worked on on a mainstream celebrity. Thanks, — VORTEX3427 (Talk!) 07:03, 27 November 2022 (UTC)
Comments from Z1720
[edit]@Vortex3427: Comments after a quick skim:
- There's a citation needed tag that needs to be resolved before this can be nominated.
- Overall, I am a little apprehensive about how short the article is. I suggest looking for more sources at WP:LIBRARY, Google (including clicking on the news icon at the top, and Google Scholar), reliable sources at WP:RS/P and Wikipedia:WikiProject Film/Resources, and searching for sources through your local library system.
Sorry that I could not be more help, but I encourage you to keep looking for more sources to expand this article. Z1720 (talk) 02:27, 9 December 2022 (UTC)
Commments from Eurohunter
[edit]@Vortex3427: Just checked the article. Would you review song "Fest i hela huset" in return? List of issues of found:
- Add nomiations from "Filmography" to "Awards" section with appropriate table. Add there Maverick Award too Eurohunter (talk) 22:20, 1 January 2023 (UTC)
- Linnks to redirects. Eurohunter (talk) 22:20, 1 January 2023 (UTC)
- "In 2012 Duke returned to his native Trinidad and Tobago to appear in the theatre production of An Echo in the Bone starring alongside actress Taromi Lourdes Joseph and directed by fellow Yale alumna Timmia Hearn Feldman.[citation needed]" - missing reference. 22:20, 1 January 2023 (UTC)
- "Future projects" is too small section and could be integrated with "2018–2022: Marvel Cinematic Universe and film roles". Eurohunter (talk) 22:20, 1 January 2023 (UTC)
- Are his early theatre productions known by title? Eurohunter (talk) 22:20, 1 January 2023 (UTC)