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This article has had a series of improvements made recently, and in order to imrove it further it would seem appropriate for other editors to comment and add their input to the article. I think that most of the sections could be expanded more, so suggestions as to what else to include in the article would be a huge help. Comments on improving the language/tone/style of the article would also be appreciated. Rossenglish 12:00, 12 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I would appreciate this article to be copyedited by a couple of Wikipedians, one cannot always spot mistakes and bad wording etc. Rossenglish 18:33, 14 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]