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Warwick Armstrong

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I've listed this article for peer review because while it was recently listed as a Good Article, the GA reviewer was concerned about the amount of cricket jargon it contains. Having grown up with cricket, I find it difficult to disassociate myself from the terminology and write for a general audience. I would appreciate a reviewer with little or no knowledge of cricket looking at the article with the goal of ensuring all jargon is either removed, linked to an appropriate article or explained in the article body or as a footnote. Of course, other suggestions on style, MOS issues etc. would still be very welcome. The goal, of course, is Featured Article status.

Thanks,

Mattinbgn\^talk 12:06, 19 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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